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  • ::MC Konman and Vokab : Corruption:: (song)

    Me n vokab have collab'd to make a song bout politics and corruption.
    hope u can giv feed.

    (MC Konman)
    the way to survive in this world today, is by corruption.
    hard to stay alive in this world today, due to eruption.
    politics that dont have the slightest clue, on how to handle things.
    bush n blair actin untrue, makin money by scandle rings.
    while they takin money from the people, thats rightfully ours.
    and i dont think they got the right-to-be causin our scars.
    wen we havin problems payin are bills and gettin by.
    im happy wen a president gets killed, threatend or dies.
    poverty every were, disease crime and violence.
    corrupt cops bein bribed, i wanna hear sirens, but jus silence.
    so each force, or powerful person that enforces laws.
    is also the primary source, the cause of crimes and wagin wars.
    bush, leadin the war of the races. this is disgrace.
    this nazi bitch replaces every ecense of good wiv hate.
    blair, lyin every thing that he says and speaks.
    not wantin to help and not givin a shit about the streets.
    all this corruption leads to politicians wiv corrupt missions.
    in strong possitions tryin to acomplish they corrupt ambitions.
    people jus tryin to find the easy way out.
    cheatin there way to power, actions we could do without.
    all these problems and actions that we cant fix due to politics.
    crecked transactions, dirty tricks wiv pain to inflict.

    (Vokab)
    Universally trying to keep you out of university/
    never admitting adversity and doing nothing at all but curse the free/
    Devils in disguise, a nice suit will rob you before someone in rags/
    excessive greed rules our leaders, constantly having some fun fillin bags/
    righteous visionaries are shot down before true potential is reached/
    in this post 9/11 world it's nothing to have your rights essentially breached/
    let the older generations take the blame, in this classroom they're the teachers/
    little regard is held for us youth, they've smashed through nature's features/
    until we realize that we've been had, we're being had/
    money makes the world go round, and it's really sad/
    intelligence agencies anticipate every move that you may make/
    no heed is taken for your sake, or the rules they break/
    all of civilization is owned by this corruption/
    the whole world is just a plot, it makes you question your function/
    if the crimes we permitted to be committed would become clearly transmitted/
    could we over time learn to regret the ignorance and apathy that were emitted?/
    only the rich people with fine lineage make real decisions/
    nobody else can decide about airplane-to-tower collisions/
    "the two towers were destroyed by terrorists of Islam"/
    riveting lies made to keep the masses calm/
    original money put Bush in the White House chair/
    little known billionaires pull strings up there/

    (read the first letter of each line)

    feed if u can, uppin.
    Last edited by DeVere; 09-09-2005, 05:19 PM.

  • #2
    uppin...

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    • #3
      upping for feedback
      Free Agent
      3 Wins - 3 KOs - 2 Losses

      .:::STREET DISCIPLES:::.
      |GAP2GAP|CT9|SWITCH-B|
      |Vokab|Green Chronic|

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      • #4
        Yo nice drop from both yall... flow and vocab was hot bro
        _____________________________

        They call me Sinful for a reason.....
        Think about it.....

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        • #5
          aite drop...dadadadadadadada...vokabs vese was better
          R.I.P. To The G.O.A.T
          Lamont "Big L" Coleman

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          • #6
            Thanks for the feedback, repped back where I could
            Free Agent
            3 Wins - 3 KOs - 2 Losses

            .:::STREET DISCIPLES:::.
            |GAP2GAP|CT9|SWITCH-B|
            |Vokab|Green Chronic|

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            • #7
              The onyl real problem in the piece I saw was sometimes vokab it seemed that you would change or have to stretch words to make them rhyme tho sometime. Otherwise it was a nice piece n I also think vokabs verse was better.

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              • #8
                Damn I cant rep most of you... I've already done it recently so it won't let me anymore...

                CT9 I hear what your saying, putting in the message down the side and trying to get more multis in messed up the flow in some parts, if I did audio I'd have to slow down and speed up to keep bars equal. Thanks for the feed man.
                Free Agent
                3 Wins - 3 KOs - 2 Losses

                .:::STREET DISCIPLES:::.
                |GAP2GAP|CT9|SWITCH-B|
                |Vokab|Green Chronic|

                0 Wins - 0 KOs - 0 Losses

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                • #9
                  thnx for the feed every1, uppin...

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                  • #10
                    nice drop. konman got the flow on this but both were good. good topic, fuk bush
                    can u chek out 'like a storm' in freestyle forum pliz?is very important. thanks

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                    • #11
                      yo that was a good combo, you both ruled the flow.
                      OH HAI!

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                      • #12
                        thnx man, uppin.

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                        • #13
                          this was a great colab
                          nice vocab n flow in both verses
                          good topic you two decided on

                          wen we havin problems payin are bills and gettin by.
                          im happy wen a president gets killed, threatend or dies.

                          if the crimes we permitted to be committed would become clearly transmitted/
                          could we over time learn to regret the ignorance and apathy that were emitted?/

                          these were some tight lines n wit vocab's verse i understand how the content n syllables could seem excessive thgh if rapped or on audio could be made to sound more of convenience then displayed text - thgh tight verses from both of you

                          Hot piece

                          keep @ it yall

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