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  • --LIKE A STORM----(FULL)IS VERY IMPORTANt TO GET FEEDBAK PLEASE PEOPLE, RELLY

    plis is very important for me to get feedbak ratin it if u can like this 0/10, u know, if U READ IT AT LEAST SAY SUM PLEASE. mayb ill change sumthin but at the moment chek it out!

    THANK YOU FOR SPEND SOME TIME WITH THIS ILL REP U

    [Verse 1]
    People pushing other people like nuttin will happen
    I dont respond you not cuz Ima pussy, Im just actin
    If you wanna gather all the clouds in this cleared sky
    You’ll see an athmosphere so horrible that youll think you’re high
    My veins will mark my skin like almost blowin up
    This steam you see is my rage that is growin up
    It will be so horryfing that youll be a week throwin up
    And you will learn that from me, nothing sucks
    I do kicks like Bruce Lee, I punch like Ali
    I can fight fast and joke at the same time, such like Jackie
    And look for the knife I got hidden, dont turn back at me
    I married the Devil didnt you go to my wedding?
    Idiot is a methaphor, just to make you shit on your pants
    If you dont know about history, Ima show u the Big Bang
    Earthquakes, floodings and hurricanes like in New Orleans
    If you dont live in, ima deport you to there in your dreams

    [Chorus]
    Like a storm [thunder] I will sweep everything
    Like a strom [thunder] with all the homies I bring
    Like a storm, a tsunami, a giant
    Ill step you on like warms, and Ill make go out the fire
    With the clouds, with the thunders, my mouth
    My best weapon of my natural army against the crowd
    Hurricanes, floodings and with my waves ill step u on
    Rainin, pouring, Im strong as a storm[thunder]

    [Verse 2]
    You should looked at the birds, how they fly
    Making rounds and rounds, be smarter to know its a sign
    It says that a strom is coming here, everyoby run away
    Afraid of my nature’s troops, you know I dont play
    You look for help, hear the eco of the emptyness
    Deaf ears to save you cuz they hate you this aint laziness
    Is ignoring, while Im stiring the sea, have a shower
    Whirlpools splashing water mixed with gunpowder
    Boom, every hater, flying to death
    You fight but you cant win, you try doin the best
    Im like Zeus, I throw thunders to the mortal guys
    With all my fury gathered at the end to electrify em
    Like soldiers, they are strucking down in front my knees
    And the shock is hard as I think they dont even breathe
    My missiles of power are stronger than an American bomb
    But then I apologize, a thing they never done -------these final lines will be changed prolly

    [Chorus]
    Like a storm [thunder] I will sweep everything
    Like a strom [thunder] with all the homies I bring
    Like a storm, a tsunami, a giant
    Ill step you on like warms, and Ill make go out the fire
    With the clouds, with the thunders, my mouth
    My best weapon of my natural army agaisnt the crowd
    Hurricanes, floodings and with my waves ill step u on
    Rainin, pouring, Im strong as a storm[thunder]

    [Verse 3]
    I thought I beat your ass enough to leave it stinging
    So now you should hear your death clock ringing
    Hey wattup, Im your death motherfucker
    Lets make a trip to hell, demon, heres another sucker
    Your as brave that you are swimin in my sea
    Lets make a lil whirpool, lets see if you like this
    Drowining under my trick, I control you like puppets
    If you defyed me then, all the doors to escape are locked
    Catastrophe, oh drama another one bites the dust!
    Dont cry mama, he wasnt as good as you think he was
    The flow is the flooding, the lyrics are a hurricane
    The beat is the earthquake, the punches are the rain
    The city now is some soaked ash with some blood
    The corpses float, and now the cops dont shoot
    The sky gets dispaired again, the sun light of the glory
    Makes everyones alive smile, n bad guys are dead, end of story

    [Chorus X2]
    Like a storm [thunder] I will sweep everything
    Like a strom [thunder] with all the homies I bring
    Like a storm, a tsunami, a giant
    Ill step you on like warms, and Ill make go out the fire
    With the clouds, with the thunders, my mouth
    My best weapon of my natural army agaisnt the crowd
    Hurricanes, floodings and with my waves ill step u on
    Rainin, pouring, Im strong as a storm[thunder]

  • #2
    feed pliz

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    • #3
      hey man, good flow.
      but in sum bits the vocab could be better, and in sum bits the rhymes were a bit forced.
      it was aight, keep it up man.

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      • #4
        thx man

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        • #5
          Sup man i agree wit konman on some of the vocab thgh your content was still good n the flow was mostly on point
          overall this is a good piece man wit the layout n number of verses you have listed being good
          n like how you described some of your rhymes throughout your song
          keep @ it man

          peace

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          • #6
            thx. tho i changed a lot of things specially the scnd vrse.

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            • #7
              nice flow man i liked it fav part was I thought I beat your ass enough to leave it stinging
              So now you should hear your death clock ringing
              yall done fucked up now endagered the industry better be prepared it's the return of conspiracy

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              • #8
                relly? so mayb i dont change it. thx

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