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    6 BARS OF DEATH

    aight i got hunger for rap like when jesus fed the million,
    i dont like hurtin or Shootin but shit im possesd to kill man,
    it feel like my chest is cavin in an my lungs is deflaten,
    an im startin to burn up when I rap prolly because im rhyming wit satan
    police can catch me they call me neo because i dodge them like the matrix,
    i can make you backflip an land on a board but i aint talkin about no skate tricks,
    An now im pickin up sticks, you sayin u ghetto but you aint even seen no bricks,
    I got plenty hoe lickin on the dick but you gay youll get yaself a girl an back down jus from a Kiss,
    My rhymes is a lot tighter and well my flow spits out quick like forcin out piss,

  • #2
    youve made 2 of the same threads.

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    • #3
      its because i couldnt fsee the thread so i posted it again sorry man but could you give me feed

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      • #4
        the flow was pretty bad cuz of the streched bars, and the vokab cld be improved.
        they wernt really bars of death, not enough insults or aggression.
        ova then that, it was ok.
        keep elevatin man.

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        • #5
          aight thanks well the title was jus an expression well thanks for the feed

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          • #6
            lol...... kool

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            • #7
              mo feed please uppin....

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              • #8
                mo feed uppin

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                • #9
                  What konman said ^^^ Plus you should work on your metaphors





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                  • #10
                    hey, feed on my 15 bars of terror if u can plz.

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                    • #11
                      I agree with all they said . Keep elevating

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