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  • Gone--SOME FEED WOULD BE NICE

    Maybe I'll Get some feed....who knows...

    Gone--

    Revenge so sweet like a spring cherry pie//
    Finally got sick of hearing Sherry lie//
    All those times toghether apperently meant nothing//
    The good timez on the town were all spent bluffing//
    We went together like red and green//
    The suddenly she ended up dead in a dream//
    A scene that re-plays itself nightly//
    Scared to go to sleep afraid of what I might see//
    Signs all around, I was just bein' used//
    But seeing them just got me confused//
    I'm just hurting myself, tied up in a knot//
    Heart is torn, feelings are in a clot//
    Theres a fork in the road and I went straight//
    And this path had directed me right to hell's gate//
    And she's the devil, suckin' out all my well-being//
    And I fall for her again, the tricks so decieving//

    hmm.....
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  • #2
    uppin....would you believe that...I leave feed but get known in return....

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    • #3
      I suppose it would

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      • #4
        nothing too special but i liked it. flowed pretty well

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        • #5
          Thnks...^^^ repped...

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          • #6
            It wasnt that bad had good multis n some good comparisons. Nothing amazing u didnt seem to have it come from ur heart.

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            • #7
              Nothin special lyrically but still you got your point across well. A bit more of a lyrical spin on it would have been nice.

              Peace
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              They call me Sinful for a reason.....
              Think about it.....

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              • #8
                mmm.. i liked how the ending turned out, i dont care what everyone else is saying about this, but im pretty impressed, not that u suck or anything, but it was hott, i liked it

                7.5 or 8/10

                PS
                can u leave feedback on Never Good Enough?
                Originally posted by Realize
                evilspecialist has always been a god of poetry even before his join date of june 04

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                • #9
                  Sounds more like a chorus, than a verse.

                  I realy just opened this cause i mistook the word "FEED" for "WEED", I am so fucking high right now.
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                  • #10
                    Thnks for feed...and ES I'll check it when i get home...i'm at school right now

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