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    The Final Hour

    The flatline hits him
    An attack inflicted...5 men 5 9's...2 clips cliped him
    No way to change the spray
    Today we relate to the fate that he could not escape that day
    In the alley way walking home
    The shots will rome...the fall of an Empire in one man...shot alone
    Drug related deaths infect
    Slugs escaped the neck and chest...the moniters asleep...so the Tech went to rest
    Back to the hospital
    The doctor in the room with her...the breaths begin to lack threw the nostrils
    The beeps cause insanity
    Heart moniter slows down, goes steep, then stops suddenly...He falls asleep as we lost humanity
    The mother leaves the room in tears
    Death ruint her fears...the one man she held dearly...she knew for years
    Was now gone forever
    A love like Mickeys of Vodka...the way that they were so strong together
    Talks to herself for a moment
    as the tears she tastes
    She shot herself for her own man
    ...then leaves this place
    The time turns sour
    Strong words to rhyme with power...Cuz the strongest love is in the Final Hour
    Last edited by r00k; 09-12-2005, 03:43 PM.

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    • #3
      Dude just quit rapping......


































































      Like a professional lol. That shit was sick straught up.
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      • #4
        That Shit Is FUCKIN FIRE MAN, Nice Shit Keep It Up, DAMN!!!

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        • #5
          Thanks for feed

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          • #6
            Flawless piece man
            I agree with the feed from the others in this thread
            n i liked your overall style for writing this piece man
            flow was onpoint as wit content wordplay n multi's

            definately a great piece man
            keep @ it

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            • #7
              Props on feed

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              • #8
                One of the best I've read lately.....I like the format of it to....along with how you fit everything into the topic/title...nice piece

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                • #9
                  Thanks Axis

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                  • #10
                    incredible shit man i really liked it
                    yall done fucked up now endagered the industry better be prepared it's the return of conspiracy

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                    • #11
                      Thanks

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                      • #12
                        No prob.
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                        • #13
                          no prob
                          yall done fucked up now endagered the industry better be prepared it's the return of conspiracy

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                            Thanks for feed

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                            • #15
                              Uping

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