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  • Confusion (mother fuckers peep my shit!!!!!)..Thank you.

    Yo just a little verse but id appreciate feedback



    Everyone’s saying that im weird, So what’s new?/
    Can’t trust my thoughts im confused,What should I do?/
    I only want love without pain,Insane in the game,/
    So alone I eternally remain,Aint it a shame/
    Forever im inviting,Death will get no fighting/
    I’m an alien moonlighting,On this Earth cuz im frightened/
    Of wherever it is I came from,Where do I belong?/
    Im just a lost soul searching for better days/
    Did I go wrong?/
    I got a pain so strong my bloods boiling/
    Turmoiling,Avoiding life,My families in mourning/
    I wish this morning had never begun/
    I love the cold of the dark.Not the warmth of the sun/
    I need no one,I prefer being alone/
    I aint sharing my pain,Bitch, go find your own/
    My gaskets blown now im leaking/
    Floorboards creaking,My soul weakens/
    With every freaking word that im freaking speaking/
    I don’t believe in,Anyone or anything/
    I just search for a happy place where love is King/
    And happiness is the only law we abide by/
    A soul mate who believes the fantasies from my minds eye/
    But that’s enough dreaming/
    My hearts full of demons/
    Im obsessed with torn flesh,Haunted by screaming/
    Im feening for a new start to this bad life/
    Fuck it, pass the knife its time for suicide/




    Thanx for reading y'all


    PEACE
    The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

    ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

    R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

  • #2
    Tight....

    I Liked that shit playa.Keep it up,i can relate 2 bein all alone and shit.Yo that was hot,keep it up.and dont get discouraged when ppl dont reply dog.Keep doin ur shit,its hot!

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    • #3
      No doubt

      Yo CoN, thanx for the love man.

      I aint tripping too much over not getting replies, this rap shits for my heart ya know. But its real good to get positive feedback from a tight lyricist like ya self ("this aint livin" was da shit)

      And yo, when i get my deal, i'll put you on my album!!!! (lmao)

      Keep peeping and posting playa


      PEACE
      The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

      ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

      R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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      • #4
        Aight......

        Thankz 4 tha love.
        But foreal do ur thing and maybe u can get that record deal lol.

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