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  • milly_b26
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    haha, yeah, Xplicit told me about the other thread just after i clicked sned on this one, never mind. cant believe u'd rip something like that.......but i'll save that for the other thread.

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  • So Solid Player
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    Enter the Battler

    Milly dont give him/her/it props, its probably biten from some poetry book or some shit

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  • milly_b26
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    I thought it was good, but then i apparently don't know shit about this stuff so I wouldn't take my word as final. Its a bit depressing for me tho.

    Love the MC bitch list - short, sweet and right on target.

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  • TodaysEvil
    started a topic My poem--Hit me tell me what ya think

    My poem--Hit me tell me what ya think

    I call you on the phone, even though it cost me all I own/You use a different tone, maken me feel unkown/All I can think about is you Miss. Stone/You make me cry, but yet I still hear my moan/I feel like Im in the twilight zone, except Im not alone/I look in your eyes cuz you know they cant lie/I use to get high and want to die/But now that I quit I can see it all clearly/Its not disorted or disfigured, now I dont want to pull the trigger/I watched what I discharged from my mouth, cuz I didnt wanna lose ya/But it all discharged in my face, felt like gettin spread with mace/Now I had a taste, I feel like I was a waste, my heart feels misplaced/My life would be better earsed, or maybe just replaced/I should be incased in a coffin, and buried six feet under/Those few words you said hit me like thunder, put my heart in a blender/I use to be a big contender, the best defender, now I can only say I surrender/I dint feel like liven but Liegh Ann Talked me out of it/You wasnt ready to commit, but at least you could admit it/I'll see ya in a bit, cuz I gotta split/

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