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  • My poem--Hit me tell me what ya think

    I call you on the phone, even though it cost me all I own/You use a different tone, maken me feel unkown/All I can think about is you Miss. Stone/You make me cry, but yet I still hear my moan/I feel like Im in the twilight zone, except Im not alone/I look in your eyes cuz you know they cant lie/I use to get high and want to die/But now that I quit I can see it all clearly/Its not disorted or disfigured, now I dont want to pull the trigger/I watched what I discharged from my mouth, cuz I didnt wanna lose ya/But it all discharged in my face, felt like gettin spread with mace/Now I had a taste, I feel like I was a waste, my heart feels misplaced/My life would be better earsed, or maybe just replaced/I should be incased in a coffin, and buried six feet under/Those few words you said hit me like thunder, put my heart in a blender/I use to be a big contender, the best defender, now I can only say I surrender/I dint feel like liven but Liegh Ann Talked me out of it/You wasnt ready to commit, but at least you could admit it/I'll see ya in a bit, cuz I gotta split/
    You don't know me, I don't know you
    So don't approach me, I won't approach you
    And don't insult me, I won't insult you
    Cause you don't know what I will or I won't do--Eminem
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    "Some asshole kept throwing oranges and other fruit at me while I was onstage. Fucker had an arm like a major league pitcher..." -Eminem
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    "I ain't a killa but don't push me//
    Revenge is like the sweetest joy next to gettin' pussy"- 2Pac
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    want you to aim wrong remain strong /
    Although its hard to stay calm when your face is laced with napalm
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    Fuck you, and fuck the world-TodaysEvil
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    Lyrical Assasins
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    * VeRsEsPiTA *

    [email protected] http://www.atomicvocals.com/ubb/avatars/man031.gif

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    Punk Bitch MC's List
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    **Marcel Lee**

  • #2
    I thought it was good, but then i apparently don't know shit about this stuff so I wouldn't take my word as final. Its a bit depressing for me tho.

    Love the MC bitch list - short, sweet and right on target.
    if i had a dick i know u'd be riding it

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    • #3
      Enter the Battler

      Milly dont give him/her/it props, its probably biten from some poetry book or some shit
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      FearMentor
      Emin3m_2001
      Addict
      Scarface
      Konvict

      Bitches gonna get played

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      • #4
        haha, yeah, Xplicit told me about the other thread just after i clicked sned on this one, never mind. cant believe u'd rip something like that.......but i'll save that for the other thread.
        if i had a dick i know u'd be riding it

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