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    I've never posted anything on a messageboard b4 but I'm gonna now. I wrote it real quick to the beat of Shit Can happen

    They call me Suvachi
    I'm taken over like tha Nazis
    I'm more annoyin than the Papparzzi
    Dressed in a black trench coat
    I ain't the typea ***** to hop on ya sail boat
    I'd rather be left at the bottom of the riva
    Than be fuckin a bitch from behind and find out it's a Mister
    Lyrics so evil its almost Satanistic
    Put me on the record and watch me go balistic
    If u missed it u need to press rewind
    Suvachi's taken over ya body then ya mind
    *****s come listen and bitches go and hide
    Defeat me with no Revenge is hard 2 find
    Start up with Suvachi ***** u in a bind
    I swear ***** dont even think I'm lyin
    I'm comin out like I wasnt even tryin
    or today is my last day & 2morrow I'm dyin
    Fuck with WILD DUDES get fucked from behind
    U *****s wanted war here it is u crossed the line!!

    ne way this is it so plz respond! pz *****s
    WILD DUDES RULE & GOODBYE FOREVER

    Bleek's Bedroom Buddies
    Sour Bleek
    Sweet Bleek
    Mild Bleek


    Coming soon, Sleep Over Party!!!!! THE FIRST BLEEK'S BEDROOM BUDDIES ALBUM!

  • #2
    HmMmMmMmMmMmm.......

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    I Rate ur shit about a 5 or 5 in a half.It was tight,but some parts werent that great.Keep'em up dog.

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    • #3
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      I thought that shit was good for the first time postin on tha board, it was tight but u need more variation in ure rhymes and better use of vocab, and more metaphors, but everyone gets better with practice, keep postin!

      LaTeRz

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      • #4
        thanks homie! I did revise it a bit and I'm gonna put it up as part of a song with my new crew, Bleek's Bedroom Buddies. pz

        and thanks for checkin it homies.
        WILD DUDES RULE & GOODBYE FOREVER

        Bleek's Bedroom Buddies
        Sour Bleek
        Sweet Bleek
        Mild Bleek


        Coming soon, Sleep Over Party!!!!! THE FIRST BLEEK'S BEDROOM BUDDIES ALBUM!

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        • #5
          a little short but i like that shit real good rhymes yo Suvachi can u please GO AND VOTE ON THE FINAL TOURNI THREAD IN THE BATTLE BOARD RIGHT NOW IM LOSING ITS A STICKY THREAD ITS REAL IMPORTANT SO K U CHECK IT OUT AND VOTE

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