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  • My first flow check it

    yo yo check it:

    I'm bitin' at your ankles like a labrador retreiver
    Striking you body like an epileptic seizure
    Labled a tort-feasor
    Criminal, messages not subliminal
    staright up makin' your funds minimal
    I spend my days supporting my vices
    drinking beers and shooting dices
    I know thats not plural, but I'm urban not rural
    I gotta a limited vocabulary
    that of a half-brained canary
    with his wings clipped, buried in a cemetary
    once you meet me you know I'm scary
    I impose fear
    I'm like a snake you sense my evil odor when I'm near
    If i wanna see shady I'll look in the mirror (pronounced meer)
    I bring fake emcee's to tears
    put knives to queers, pray to god that homos disappear
    I strike from the rear; with a glock in my hand
    Lyrics explosive like illegal contraband
    I'm the man and the mic is my masterplan
    see my competition and ask them how fast they ran

    thats it. sorry about the short length but I'm tired its 3 am. I'll write a longer one later. what do you guys think?

    rabidlab ain't noone as ill as me.
    I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
    as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

  • #2
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    Yo,Tight verse u spit dog.But tha flow was good if u rapped ina slow style(like bizzare).Some of ur rhymes didnt hit off 2gether.i had 2 stop and try-and see where they conected.But other than that it was a tight ass spit.Keep it up

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    • #3
      thanks for the feedback man. Reading rhymes is always tricky on a fuckin computer but I see what you mean. This flow also works if you rap it real fast thats how I was reading it as I wrote it.
      I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
      as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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      • #4
        1st time on the spot..Frontin the STL

        Yo Yo Yo....

        I'm new on the spot--Rabid Lab I dunno if I should be messin wit u or not--I guess we'll find out, I'll take a chance--But u, u don't wanna dance--I'm a flowmasta--With my rhymes I bring a world of dizasta--I'm a white rappa--
        I'm comin outta the STL--lookin for a new rhymin crew--I need peeps that run under BLUE--and a 6 Point Star--Drivin expensive cars--Peeps that can buy Henessy at the bar--Have tha potential to go far--
        Right now I'm a lil drunk--Got this 1 fag in tha back of my trunk--He tried to get w/ my gal--I showed him that I wasn't his pal--I was his worst enemy--Shot him harda than that 1 dude did Kennedy--He wanted me to be friendly--Please Mr. Mr. he screamed--
        Lets get back to da subject--I'll out spit u in public--Any day of the week--any time ur free--We can do it once or we can do this couple of times--Eitha way I'll keep spittin my rhymes..



        It's kinda short but its my first time flowin for others to view or hear
        ..Chadd Bordeaux....a.k.a. BIg NaStY

        ~!~You don't wanna fuck with me today// Cuz a lil sumthin sumthin comin ur way//~!~
        ----Limp Bizkit

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        • #5
          Not too bad Big Nasty way to represent the Midwest like that. peace.
          I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
          as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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