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  • Yo i felt like a freestyle. Check it out yall

    Freestyling



    No friends,dead ends/
    My words offend/
    Contemplate my mindstate-accellerate through the bends/
    Debate my kinds fate,have twisted visions of pain/
    Only clouded by these insane dreams of fame/
    Nobodys the same/
    Cursed from birth,no matter who swung first/
    It was Illrun who was always to blame/
    Is it my face?/
    That inspires-violence or is it the way/
    I strangle these dumb punk-motherfuckers with chains/
    Ill never change/
    Diseased with a psychotic sickness/
    Which makes me rip this,mic up with a quickness/
    Iv the longest shitlist,and im quick to add the witness/
    Who wanna tesitfy and try to stick me for my riches/
    Family of bitches,encouragement didnt exist/
    I cant resist, involvement in this scandalous business/
    So i enrole in this army of rhyme spitterz/
    Big hitterz,wig splitterz and thug n****z/
    All out to fuck up those with mis-placed s******z/
    We hip hopperz, twinned with beat dropperz/
    Evolved from body popperz linked with glock cockerz/
    You cant stop us - "We All Ride" when its on uz/
    I passed with honours, from RAP skools/
    Now im out to drag the game to new-improved levels/
    My cru is dudes that never settled,and now they revel/
    In living their lifes as rebels, foot on the pedals/
    Driving their own fate,they silently wait to see what awaits/
    Is it hell or the pearly gates?/
    So many tortutred, but still aviod suicide/
    Never been nutured,they've no mothers at their side/
    They'd rather ride if it means they eat tonight/
    Surprise-surprise someones getting beat tonight/
    Thats it, we could preach all day/
    But it aint like god pays attention when we pray/
    So you dont have to "listen close to what we say/
    Cuz we gonna rise above you one day anyway"/



    Yo i just freestyled that, i meant it to be just about me but i just read through it and i kinda trailled off onto a
    "hip hop vs the world" kinda thing. nevermind.reply yall aiight.


    PEACE
    Last edited by Illrun; 07-20-2001, 04:04 PM.
    The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

    ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

    R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

  • #2
    Diseased with a psychotic sickness/
    Which makes me rip this,mic up with a quickness/
    Iv the longest shitlist,and im quick to add the witness/
    Who wanna tesitfy and try to stick me for my riches/


    tight ass rhyme yo i like them lines above keep up the rhymes son

    YO GO AND VOTE ON THE FINAL BATTLE ITS STICKY ON THE BATTLE BOARD PEEP IT ME AND YEROC AND IM LOSING SO CHECK IT AND VOTE

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    • #3
      Rating...

      The start of ure freestyle was a bit dodgy, kinda all over the place, but as u got to the middle part of your rhyme, the pace picked up and it started to flow better, good theme too...keep at it man...keep postin...

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      • #4
        Thanx yall

        Fo real,

        Its supposed to start slow then the beat drops about half way thru (kinda like instigator)

        Yo thanx for the feed back, and emphr i just voted on your battle
        and to be honest my vote went to yeroc cuz......fuck it i wrote a LONG-ASS reply on the battle thread, read that for the reason

        PEACE
        The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

        ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

        R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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        • #5
          Aight thats kool, I understand the flow of your rhyme now...good shit

          LaTeRz

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          • #6
            ..........

            Yo,Playa...wassup?
            Yo i loved ur rhyme.I was tight as hell dog.Keep that shit up...for real..That was phat....

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            • #7
              Yo thanx for the love CoNtRo,

              And yo i just read your sig and da line from swifty "in yo system like eco lie etc" that aint from "fight music" its from "shit can happen"

              Thanx for peeping

              PEACE
              The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

              ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

              R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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