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    This is my first ever freestyle so yes i know it sucks

    Don't come near me when these words I'm spittin
    I'm all angry and your head'll get bitten
    Hell, all I'm trying to do is learn to flow
    One day these words could earn me lots of doe
    Oh shit what am I thinking I must be dreaming
    When you all see this it'll be me you're triple teaming
    As you can see my rhymes don't make sense
    Or maybe it's just this stress that's making me so fucking tense
    You never know what could happen if I took some lessons
    Maybe my rhymes would flow smoother than a bullet from my smith and westons
    Fuck, I don't know what to say next
    I'll leave it to you write me some text


    Wow that was a lot harder than I thought. Tell me what you think for a first attempt and please be honest
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    MSN: [email protected]

    Thanx to everyone for making me feel so welcome and I look forward to meeting all my fellow UK derty heads.

  • #2
    Thats pretty good man for your first flow. I'm new around here too so I don't know if you want to take advice from me but whatever keep working at it.

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    I'm convinced future MC's are sending robots back in time
    as we speak to kill my mother before I'm born

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    • #3
      Cheers rabidlab. I was about to post a reply telling people to not read my rhyme cos I just read your first freestyle and I realised I've got a long way to go. Any way thanx 4 the feedback
      http://slickjesus.homestead.com/files/skittle.gif

      The greatest trick the devil ever pulled was convincing the world he didn't exist

      AIM: SkittlesRap
      MSN: [email protected]

      Thanx to everyone for making me feel so welcome and I look forward to meeting all my fellow UK derty heads.

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      • #4
        Good...

        skittles that was good for a first attempt. for a start, youve got the flow right, spot on. The only thing is the content, on your next verse if you write about a subject then shit would b tight, Keep at it and Keep postin...

        LaTeRz

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        • #5
          Yo for a first attempt it couldve been alot worse, so dont get disheartened, keep working at it, if you wanna compete with other emcees on this board you have a long way to go cuz their are some real tight rappers on here. but personally i think you should just work on a stlye that suits you, dont spit gangsta or playa shit just cuz people like it. BE YOURSELF and thats how you will get the most respect. Do you, and keep posting.

          PEACE
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          ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

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          • #6
            for a fist attempt that was tight, dont get so down on yourself.

            practice makes perfect.
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            a soldier only dies but one.

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