HIP HOP LIFESTYLE

Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

What u think of my rhyme??(got a chance of makin it big?)

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • What u think of my rhyme??(got a chance of makin it big?)

    Yo/im only 14 but dont need no slack/comin rite at ya wit dis lyrical attack/cant b stopped at this age/will never b controoled wit my rage/my teachers sad i was a disturbance/i looked at dat as if i earned it/d-12 comin wiy some tite shit now/even thouhg it freaks my mom and dad out/now u think u got friends, got news for u/they will sneak up and beat u till u black and blue/so whatcha think of my freestyle/it didnt take me along while/this shit just pops in my head/sometimes i think as if im dead/anyway im bustin outta dis now/catch u on da otha side/ PEACE IM OUT!

    Rate me b honest
    Age:14
    Race:white
    Lives:illinois
    My shit my way, so fuck off!

  • #2
    PEEP IT

    someone rate me im 14 and dat was my frrestyle not like some others that looked pre-written! i did use a rhyme more than once(double bar) bc i was freestylin and said what poppe din my head!
    My shit my way, so fuck off!

    Comment


    • #3
      ???

      started out nice in the begginin, buttttt kinda shitty at the end, all the good ones in here dont prewrite, and dont be happy withbein 14 and all, i just turned 15, but just practice, and try to keep it real throughout the whole freestyle

      Comment


      • #4
        yo kid a agree wit proof it came strong at the start but then got worse,and u aint neva gona make it wit an attitude like dat

        all of the gud emcees on here dont rap so they can make it,they rap coz its fun and sumething 2 do so dont go in wit that additude coz its not wut rap is about
        http://www.overgrow.com/edge/gallery/6687/m.i.c.jpg
        Respect to lil ells for hosting my pic

        Originally posted by M.I.C.
        I quit this battle, this is CORRUPT!!!!!

        M.I.C you and everyone on this board is Corrupt!!!!!!
        M.I.C. WAS LOOSING OUR NAME BATTLE WITH 1 DAY TO GO SO HE QUIT. he is no man and i have lost all respect i had for him.

        Comment

        Post ad widget 300x250

        Collapse

        LATEST POSTS

        Collapse

        Topics Statistics Last Post
        Started by Drishk, Today, 06:49 AM
        1 response
        3 views
        0 likes
        Last Post Lipa
        by Lipa
         
        Started by Rapsodia, Today, 04:22 AM
        1 response
        4 views
        0 likes
        Last Post Heridan
        by Heridan
         
        Started by markcarlson70, Today, 05:22 AM
        0 responses
        1 view
        0 likes
        Last Post markcarlson70  
        Started by Deborahlanker, Today, 05:18 AM
        0 responses
        1 view
        0 likes
        Last Post Deborahlanker  
        Started by bodytonketouk, Yesterday, 12:40 AM
        1 response
        2 views
        0 likes
        Last Post Fembecting  
        Started by Louiscuming, Today, 04:04 AM
        10 responses
        16 views
        0 likes
        Last Post Louiscuming  
        Started by monogairock, Today, 04:00 AM
        0 responses
        2 views
        0 likes
        Last Post monogairock  
        Started by kmqwdhgunmgh, Today, 02:57 AM
        0 responses
        1 view
        0 likes
        Last Post kmqwdhgunmgh  
        Started by zacezaha, Today, 02:46 AM
        0 responses
        1 view
        0 likes
        Last Post zacezaha  
        Started by virgiehuff, Today, 01:38 AM
        0 responses
        1 view
        0 likes
        Last Post virgiehuff  
        Working...
        X