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    Yo, tell me what u think about this rhyme I done it when I was roasted last night but still check it,

    U HEARD OF SNOOP DOGG… WELL AM CHRONIC DOGG
    NOT A MUTHFUCKIN RIP OFF OF THE TOP DOGG,
    JEST INFLUENCED BY SNOOP DOGG,

    I ONLY BUST RHYMES WHEN AM ON A CHRONIC TRIP,
    U BETTER WATCH UR ASS WHEN I COMIN UP BEHIND YA BITCH,
    I KNOW YOUR HOLDIN DAWG DON’T PLAYA HATE ME,
    I’LL BUST YA ASS OPEN WORSE THAN THE COP ON PULP FICTION,

    BITCHES CAN'T SUCK DICK ...OUCH IT WONT REACH MY MOUTH
    IF I COULD DO IT MYSELF I WOULDN'T LEAVE THE HOUSE
    BUT I CAN’T SO HERES WERE YA MOMMA COMES IN
    STICK IT DOWN HER THOART THE BITCH STARTS TO CHOKE
    AND THATS CLASSED AS RAPE WHAT A FUCKIN DISGRACE
    YOUR CREWS A JOKE THERE TO BUSY TRYIN TO RHYME CRIME WITH TIME BUT THE ONLY HARD TIME THEY DO IS WHEN THERE FUCKIN UR ASS
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    NOW ALL YA'LL KNOW, NO PAPERS,NO SMOKE

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  • #2
    Yo, come on dawgs I ain't bothered about u dissin it just tell me what u think!!, PEACE OUT
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    NOW ALL YA'LL KNOW, NO PAPERS,NO SMOKE

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    • #3
      Ratin It...

      It's aight for a short rhyme, only advice I can give is use better vocab cuz it was kinda basic...keep postin tho....

      LaTeRz

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      • #4
        Honestly

        Yo straight up i wasnt feeling it at all dogg. Da only bit i liked was da "if i could do it myself id never leave the house" and thats cuz it made me laugh. I aint hating on ya i just couldnt find the flow, and it was a lil short too.But keep at it playa.

        PEACE

        *by the way you got da same avatar as an emcee on here called AK47 so you might wanna change it
        The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

        ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

        R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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        • #5
          yo, quite good since you were wasted :D
          when im wasted i cant even think haha
          http://dalux.dmusic.com

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