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    i feel so dam empty inside/
    enuf that i take no attempts to save pride/
    immersed I cry/
    but i must first decide/
    whether to take my chances in life or die/
    my minds dismantled movin in hyper-drive/
    cancel all beefs leave them fights aside/
    my thoughts flow freely just in my private/
    I am my own pilot, and i cant survive it/
    inflicted on my self, my own violence/
    depicted in pictures as the one smilin/
    if only someone knew about my remorse/
    coulda tried somthin new and took a different course/
    before i went to do it, its evident with my swords/
    sliced right through it, smell the scent of my sours/
    blood flows fluent, right down to the floor/
    people say they never new it, in this world im no more/
    everyone around, weepin it aint fair/
    coulda used their care, before seein me dead in a chair/
    as child i had no support in life/
    a depressed child with one resort a knife/
    tried before, unsuccessful twice/
    to my parents it meant more big fights/
    and thats what can happen when families go wrong/
    its starts with slappin then insanitys flow on/
    then more calamities, no stoppin, it rolls on/

  • #2
    sometimes a broken heart can make us all give in,
    want to be calm and make us hate hustle living ,
    we dont know what to do in a rare muddle within,
    we all have our own seperate bubble we live in .

    hear what your sayin. quite a good rhyme. freestyle?
    if so its pretty good. you could work on the rhymin though a bit
    http://dalux.dmusic.com

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    • #3
      Yo i feel ya G. Da first 10 bars were tight as hell dogg, i thought it trailed a lil towards the end but, still a hot verse. keep it up man.


      PEACE
      The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

      ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

      R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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      • #4
        thanks for the replyz

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