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  • Suffering. (Peep n reply yall)

    Yo check this verse i just wrote. Its kinda depresive in some ways but also agressive in others.Its about the fucked up way that a lot of people are treated by their countries/government.It aint really got a title or nothing but i called it suffering cuz i noticed that i used that word a fair bit.Let me know what y'all think alrite.

    Somebody please, pay heed to my desperate call/
    Alone through it all, dont wanna be like that no more/
    Dont wanna fall again,loneliness extends,causing such hurt/
    Too many confusing questions in my head,for answers i search/
    Ive crawled in the dirt and flown in the sky/
    But can someone please tell me why/
    I have such a pain going on inside/
    I have such a passion for me to die/
    Hypocrits too busy living a lie,to see whats really goin on outside/
    Suffering is touching too many lives/
    Stop being blind bitch open your eyes/
    Can you picture this twisted scene?/
    Filled with pain and suffering,children that scream-it aint a dream/
    Although sometimes it seems/
    Even my worse nightmares cant equal/
    Such blatant evil, experienced by gods people/
    Such pain is lethal, and it leaves you delirious/
    Im serious, such a fucking fuss aint good for us/
    We should blow-off the thick dust,question the blind trust/
    That we instill in goverments who still do not take care of us/
    Ignorance aint bliss,ignoring issues is what started all this shit/
    We have to address it,we have to stress it/
    Dont depress it, just do your best and then yes we will test it/

    Its a lil short, but whatever


    PEACE
    The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

    ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

    R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

  • #2
    yo nice rhyme, but what the fuck is going on here with all this, suffering, depressed, suicidal stuff?! we should be fucking happy, lets write about killin people and beating people up again coz that shit is cool :D
    http://dalux.dmusic.com

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    • #3
      deep yo
      Guess who's back...

      All tight emcee's Keep Ya Head Up, Play in the Game cuz the Game don't wait

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      • #4
        Much Love

        Yo thanx for da replys fellaz.

        I feel what ya saying ' Lux but to be honest i aint da killing type.
        Iv wrote up beat shit on here but it gets slept on, its only da depressive shit that seems to get any reponses. Ill pick it up next verse,aiight.keep peeping.

        PEACE
        The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

        ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

        R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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        • #5
          dont rap gansgta if ya aint gangsta,im more of a poet an freestyler now,i used to try to rap gansgter an could come with phat punchlines "you couldnt produce good beats with lotion"
          i paint a portrait faceless

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