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  • another song...

    this one isn't pimp shit....see i don't really know if my shits good or not i just wanna know aight?.

    i'm not gonna blow if if you say it's not

    we're in the demond land*..... satans beach without sand*
    crushed dreams now gone they were poorly planned*
    and as i stand* here watching the world as it turns*
    i yearn* to learn* the truth why do i burn*

    even though i've earned* happiness the rest of the world acts*
    like i was nothing.... the peril returns back *
    i feel it inside*..... how can i hide*.....
    my life is just a ride* which i'm sick from and i can't survive*

    i'm alive* but every breath- is a stride*
    closer to death- when i rest- i'll be blessed- with pride*
    now i've made it through this test- of mine*
    set me free- let me fly* fuck it let me be- let me shine*
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    i'm sorry..... am i depressing you*
    are you one of those people who can't stand to know the truth*
    i'm still in my youth* and already my life feels over*
    i'm stone cold sober* and still always fallin' over*

    once i fell down* face to the ground* and found a four leaf clover-
    skipped out the front yard and heard some bombers flying over*
    i see allah.... while praying to jahova*
    but i'm christian, possibly....shit i can't think, i'm sober*

    but still i carry on* i know you want me gone*
    and i don't blame you, this sick barstards already been here way too long*
    but for now i'm stuck singin the same old song*
    you think i'm wrong* to use a bong * fuck you that's exactly where i belong*

    i'm king kong* use my dong* as a lethal weapon*
    i shine so if i'm steppin* close don't be forgettin*
    your wifes frettin* and wettin* tonight's beddin*
    i'm bettin* her sights glared* she's gettin- scared* that she's sight impared*

    you know the cause of that, the bitch stared* too long*
    nightmares- of me, her eyes red-? shit i shine like the sun*
    take her back to the bed wearin a thong*, that's where she *belongs*
    with me in her mind you take advantage allnight long*

    then bring her to my next show and the one after that*
    you think i give a crap*... if i ever did i want it back*
    the human afrodisiac* providing sex for my fans*
    better then alcohol weed.....but i'm still just a man*

    alright alright i sound fucken lovin myself...that's just how it turned out
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    Last edited by esscay; 07-23-2001, 03:57 AM.
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  • #2
    that shit at the top is funny. i don't think you need to add anything to ur shit. it's gshit right now, you just need to keep writing, keep up dat practice and the more you do dat shit will flow easier.
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    • #3
      cool

      aight thanks man....that shit helps
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      • #4
        nada problem dogg
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