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  • the inferno lyricist femcee saying it how it is (tell me what u think all)

    Im the Femcee spittin fire on the mic, also known as the Inferno lyricist/
    I compete with the rest, they analyse in their mind, I give competition lyrical syphilis/
    I see you all listening to me, some of you ride with the best, you a top fuckiní emcee/
    You spit like me, to infinity, im new to this thing yíall you stereotype the losers, you chain em down when they wanna be free/
    They cry out to you they thought they were the best/
    But you created your rap, they were trapped in a word their mind a frozen state of incapability you struck them down and put them to the test/
    You shooted your words, like I shooted mine/
    We collaborated together, fuckin shot em down verbally you are delusional, sublime/
    You rap like da homeboys in upstate new york, crashing cars when youre 10 its all fucking talk/
    That bullshit yíall im the femcee that been hit/
    Im rappin like them all compared to you fuckiní shit/
    You fail to do justice you create an invalid impression you lie to the world your people, and yourself like a biblical confession/
    that hasnít been committed you are visualised as a false perception, you scream its not fair
    I fuckin tell you to shut up, Im taking painkillers for my headaches but you heartlessly donít care
    You isolate your pain, I start spittin again, I shoot down those bastards that made you this way/
    They curl up and die, their agonising wait for death to arrive takes for eterity but I donít fuckin care I threatened they would pay/
    The deal is done, and so has my thread, Ive completed, ive finished and your best friends are dead.

    Thanx all. Took me ages, but you know I'd like you to tell me what you think, and maybe i can elaborate, know what i mean

    TA

  • #2
    OI......im sad now

    Just wanted to say, i have nbo feedback so cheers for that fellow rappers

    Lady Rapper

    Please gimmie some,
    Thanx y'all

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    • #3
      Uppin!

      Ok ya'll, Helen's done this piece to get feedback from...so Yeroc, Gruesome, Fuzz, Maximus, DaLux, Narcosis, Dark, Contro, Nextwhiterapper and anyone else who comes in this forum just leave a message sayin what she can improve on and the good points of it..Peace Ya'll

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      • #4
        Hey Helen (rappin_iz_toppz)

        I liked your piece. A LOT better than the last thing i read by you. I could tell you'd taken some time on it, and its paid off. I really like this line too

        You fail to do justice you create an invalid impression you lie to the world your people, and yourself like a biblical confession
        keep it up Guuuuuuuuuuurl

        Laterz
        "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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        • #5
          Ta all......:-)

          $o $olid, i just wanna say thanx hun, for uppin it when it really needed uppin, a thousand thankyous, and more for gettin a response
          Dj Phat...to you, who has given me the feedback also, for actually telling me what u liked best and for being so positive about it and helping me realise that i do have potential where its needed.
          Thanx all, keep going wit da responses, i need all the help i can get,

          Helen alias Lady rapper

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          • #6
            UPPING

            Hi all just wanna say

            UPPING FOR FEEDBACK

            would be really appreacitaed, it would only take a few minuted of time for sumone who could really do with the help. Thanx, i really will appreciate this.

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