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  • a verse from ym first song

    its my new style of poetry hip hop

    noticing my establishment dieing,envision paranoia,the sky falls on those unloyal an spoiled like the seedling that cant grow in their soil,my rhymes an life stay close but remain distant,my pen linger with the thoughts seeping out of my palm an fingers,no accomplishmenst come to dreamers,i blink an see the real the real world behind my eyelids,we all gorw up,kids are supposed to be childish,an ocean of tears i walk the desert sands,sadness an tears go hand in hand,im not done till i die an family man,force feed my mind with the truthforcuing lies to reduce in size,cry over my demise,ill still wlak the earth,exume my body find a surprise....
    i paint a portrait faceless

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    Feeling

    Yo i liked that. I like to see thoughts put into rhymes. Its good to see an original style too.keep doin it

    PEACE
    The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

    ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

    R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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    • #3
      Eyo that was tight dawg, nice vocab and you used it to its proper use and not just to fill spaces;

      "noticing my establishment dieing,envision paranoia,the sky falls on those unloyal an spoiled like the seedling that cant grow in their soil"

      Thats some good vocab and one hell of a start to it...keep that kinda shit up man, nice to see new styles on the board, keep postin

      LaTeRz

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        thanks for the props,im really into anticon so im starting to worte lyircs like them,im not steaing thier style or anyhting
        i paint a portrait faceless

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        • #5
          Original dogg.....I so proved that I know you...see you dogg
          Mentira
          /-\narchy.

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