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    "See You Soon"-Ridiculous Rick

    Verse#1:
    Sercretly I think I'm a manic depressive,
    But I play it off actin' like I'll be succesive,
    Takin' in what are really just false blessin's,
    I'm learnin daily but quick to forget the lesson,
    This worlds so full of grief and packed with stress,
    I'm surprised the whole population ain't on cigarettes,
    I wanna say f the world like I'm pocessed by terrets,
    I bet I end up famous but I ain't good with bets,
    So when it comes down to it man I'll probably lose,
    Don't be surprised if you see me up in the news,
    With a story attached and hatched with the blues,
    Drive drunk off a bridge it could happen to you,
    If that happened I'd let the water fill up in my lungs,
    If that didn't happened you'd find me in a closet hung,
    Or with a gun to my head about to get stung,
    Ain't got much to lose money in my pocket but I'm a bum,
    Hooked on these downers hooked on the liquor,
    I'm stuck not knowin' but I ain't no bumper sticker,
    I'm fightin' against life each days a never ending bicker,
    Show me some light hell I'll settle for a flicker.

    Hook:
    The ends lookin dim my backs against the wall,
    If the wall weren't against me I swear I'd fall,
    This is it this is my doom, poppin life's ballon,
    God make room, because I'll see you soon.
    (SFX- Gun shot)


    Verse #2:
    It all started back when I was about in 10th grade,
    When it was in with the heat and out with the shade,
    Out with the innocence and in with the drug trade,
    Went from pencils and test ta getting laid and razor blades,
    Poppin' pills for cheap thrills, immoral value soon instilled,
    Into a kid born with chills, who only made it up half the hill,
    Then stumbled to the bottom and forgot to get back up,
    Just stared at the sky dreamin' up cuts fillin' his cups,
    Delousinal to most sayin' he'd see himself in the papers,
    How could I see anything I'm lost in the vapors,
    In response I'd say your furture's yet written, they bared rittens,
    I just keep fittin' lines together hopin' I'd gain some gettin's,
    It's been something like 5 years since then, I started rappin,
    5 years later ain't nothin' happened, it's all just relapin',
    An adult now still half way up the hill the problems are stackin,
    5 years practice no clappin, guess it's my self I gotta get crackin'.


    Hook:
    The ends lookin dim my backs against the wall,
    If the wall weren't against me I swear I'd fall,
    This is it this is my doom, poppin life's ballon,
    God make room, because I'll see you soon.
    (SFX- Gun shot)

    Verse#3
    My homies say I need help, what for had none and dealt,
    And only I know how I've felt, never say it but I've knelt,
    Hopin' for the warmth of Christ, life's just one big heist,
    Everything overpriced, and I can't afford nothing nice,
    Everything's based on material and looks, and I'm hooked,
    On unobtainable things like rooks, and writin' classic books,
    When those things seem far from reach, cause I'm bleached,
    And I chose a genre that don't except those to teach,
    With my exceptions, but those exceptions feel like infections,
    I think I've earned it been in trouble with the law need no corrections,
    You know what I've said is true, and it's something that'd you'd do,
    Forget my debut, cause really I've given out all the clues,
    That I'll probably be gone, before the release of this song,
    It's evident I'm stuck in a world where I don't fit and belong,
    And maybe this is all just self conscious rants, of cant's
    But it just seems I can get a glance, put on my pants.

    Hook:
    The ends lookin dim my backs against the wall,
    If the wall weren't against me I swear I'd fall,
    This is it this is my doom, poppin life's ballon,
    God make room, because I'll see you soon.
    (SFX- Gun shot)



    Ending Comments:
    It ain't finished I got 1 more verse to go, and some of the lines are streched I'll have to fix em later.
    Last edited by New Guy; 03-21-2006, 08:07 PM.
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  • #2
    Yeah, once I get outta high school, shit is gonna be different. Good verse overall, but fucked up shit. Shit is serious. Shit is the truth though.

    Peace.
    P!

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    • #3
      Yeah I really do hope so man. Ever since I've got I got out of high school I've just been job jumpin, and humpin. I really thought it was going to be so much cooler gettin' outta high school but it's much more harsh because you have no security, and everyone ridden with impurites. After high school is when shit really gets harsh. It's all about the dough, I'm gettin' it right now but I'm not satisfied with it. I guess I just see greater things for myself like this music shit, it's all I think about. 24/7 I'll be writin' lyrics during work gettin' in trouble for it, but I still gross higher numbers then any employee there. I don't know man, appericate high school while you got it, because when you get out you'll miss it. I'm sure you've heard that and been like "Yeah whatever, that smoke up my ass" but it's true. Live life with no regrets, and just be individual. Just know when to close your mouth. I don't know if that's something you've got a problem with but it's something I've had to learn the hard way, and if your strong enough to make it through high school then your already on your way as far as I'm concerned. Just don't give into the crooked and the fake, and I feel you'll take in all the stakes.

      Just some advice from someone who's been there done that.


      Cheers,
      Rick.
      The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

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      With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


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      • #4
        Well I still have center high to go to which I suppose is similar to high school. I'm just goin' there so I can feel somewhat worthy. A high school diploma still isn't worth it when you get average marks in the more important courses and can't even bother to do math. I wasted too many years doin' no shit.

        I was plannin' on pursuing a music career, but as you already know from "The Same Time", I've been feelin' it's just not worth it in a world where other motherfuckers get shit.

        Good luck with whatever ya do.

        Peace.
        Last edited by pandemic; 03-21-2006, 07:52 PM.
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        • #5
          I'm workin' on this third verse check it out when it's done and it's always worth something as long as you tried I suppose.
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          • #6
            This got no feed what so ever.
            The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

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            • #7
              I like the way you ended the first verse; the last line was genius there.

              LOVED the way you started out the second verse, and EVERYTHING IN the second verse. NICE way of describing how you felt through metaphores.

              All together, this was a pretty solid piece, and you're right - from what I can tell, VERY heart felt.
              Love, live life, proceed, progress

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              • #8
                Depressed I was.
                The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

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