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    I ainít never run a block, I ainít never had a glock
    Aimed straight at my face, cold, with nothing to embrace
    Gotta pick up the pace, if you aiming for first place
    I ainít never run a block, I ainít never had a glock
    Aimed straight at my face, cold, with nothing to embrace
    Gotta pick up the pace, if you aiming for first place
    Cuz everyday is a race, sometimes leaves you in a daze
    But this is just first phase, still got many a days
    Stuck in this jail, barred, Iím always on my guard
    Feelin a bit burnt out, charred, threw out my only ace card
    Lost all my luck on the yard, broke the mirror, left with a shard
    But I gotta admit that life ainít hard, but Iím still scarred
    Still got drama, still got trauma, still got problems with mama
    Yet I handle it in harma-ney like I was the Dalai Lama
    Lifeís too fast, just donít wanna, so ya gotta pause like a comma
    But you stuck in your pajamas, so you play it calm, huh
    Just put the world on hold, like it caught a cold
    Encased in a plastic mold, so it can be seen and behold
    Treat it like it was gold, donít waste it and let it grow old
    So watch me unravel the folds, as you take a peak into my soul

    This is my life, this is my dream, this is my reality
    This is my strife, this is my scream, this is my brutality
    So take your knife, take your regime, take your hostility
    And take everything else thatís yours away from me

    Call me SS like youíre obsessed with the alphabets
    Call me a mess, and you better have a vest on your chest
    ĎCept Iím not aiming for your breast, cuz Iím gunna suppress
    Myself from distress, no need to transgress, wonít help with success
    I know how to manage my anger, control the danger
    Never talk to a stranger, friend or foe, he might be the later
    Might be the creator, the traitor, the hater, the greater
    Maybe the translator, here to exchange my words like a dictator
    Not like Mussolini, thatís not me, not what I want to be
    And soon yaíll see, Iíll be the greatest MC, call me Ali
    So hard, I skipped the letter G, went to straight to S, now you perceive
    My lyrical ability that can reveal whatever I feel necessary
    Whateverís on my mind, like Em and Pac combined
    Did I stutter, are you blind, I said Em and Pac combined
    Donít put me on the grind, cuz of what I let unwind
    Iím a little off balanced, not aligned, but you still a step behind

    This is my life, this is my dream, this is my reality
    This is my strife, this is my scream, this is my brutality
    So take your knife, take your regime, take your hostility
    And take everything else thatís yours away from me



    So we now on the third verse, itís time for another curse
    As I lay down these words, you find out the truth hurts
    Like bullets through your t-shirts, just how life works
    Like how 7-11 got Indian clerks, I couldnít get any worse
    When I hit with these multiple rhymes, at multiple times
    Iím stuck in my prime, fuck two cents, gimme some dimes
    Iím sending so many hidden signs, like propaganda isnít a crime
    Thoughts stuck in grime, move but donít talk, lookin like a mime
    I feel so isolated, so alone, whereís my family, am I related?
    All of a sudden I feel violated, seems like Iím being tailgated
    Gun to my back, pupils dilated, claims his bullets are silver plated
    Sweat drippin, I feel sedated, will I live, die, will he be incriminated?
    And thatís when I realize, I donít want to live in this disguise
    Iím sick of these lies, so itís time I start to revise
    But amidst these cries, the devil begins to arise
    And no matter how much I despise, I know he never dies


    My name is SSquared hence the references to the letter S
    Last edited by die2nite; 03-25-2006, 04:58 PM.
    Think thoughts of jealousy at the sight of you and him
    Drink lots of hennessey to blind my mind from reviewin it

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    Come on!
    Think thoughts of jealousy at the sight of you and him
    Drink lots of hennessey to blind my mind from reviewin it

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    • #3
      thats some good shit rite there.. im trying so hard to write like that lol... it was a good flow and everything.. your choice of words were good too..
      R.I.P. DESHAUN "PROOF" HOLTON
      (F)10/2/75-4/11/06(F)
      "THEY SAY THE GOOD DIE YOUNG...." WE'LL MISS YOU

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      • #4
        Be right back, I'll read this after I finish with my porno.
        Anybody wanna lumpkin?

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        • #5
          OK I'm back... Sorry I don't like this rap.
          Anybody wanna lumpkin?

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          • #6
            That was sum nice shit man, nice vocab and multies too, rhymes were tops flow real good u had it all but just need 2 organise it try to use da 2 rhyme structure or da 4 rhyme structure u know what I mean..?
            Southern Intellect

            Its The Southern TakeOver
            Cruz

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            • #7
              I thought it was good but i thought the rhyming was a little simple if i'm being totally honest and i never think anyone should say 'best shit yet' at the top because then it makes everything think it's gonna be amazing. I liked it but i think you need to work on your structure and maybe up your vocab some more!!! Nice try. Keep writing!!!
              twitter.com/thisistc

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              • #8
                Repped everyone.
                Thanks for the comments you guys.
                Think thoughts of jealousy at the sight of you and him
                Drink lots of hennessey to blind my mind from reviewin it

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                • #9
                  p.s - - dont say u aint ever have a glock in ya rap den 18 bars later say ur aimen shit at sum1's chest
                  if theres good in every evil
                  then theres evil in every good

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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by gstringunit1
                    p.s - - dont say u aint ever have a glock in ya rap den 18 bars later say ur aimen shit at sum1's chest
                    If you finish reading you'll see that I said I don't use violence.
                    Think thoughts of jealousy at the sight of you and him
                    Drink lots of hennessey to blind my mind from reviewin it

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                    • #11
                      not bad man...keep flowin~
                      Ima T.R.A.P.S.T.R
                      Got the city on lock, N big shoes on the car

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                      • #12
                        man that was good! Well Done
                        UWE: The New Era Of Efeds

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by die2nite
                          If you finish reading you'll see that I said I don't use violence.
                          hmm... then what exactly were you aiming?... HIS WEENIE! HIS WEENIE! HIS WEENIE!.... Sorry, that was immature
                          Anybody wanna lumpkin?

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                          • #14
                            Call me a mess, and you better have a vest on your chest
                            ‘Cept I’m not aiming for your breast, cuz I’m gunna suppress
                            Myself from distress, no need to transgress, won’t help with success
                            I know how to manage my anger, control the danger

                            Where do I say I actually inflicted physical harm?
                            Think thoughts of jealousy at the sight of you and him
                            Drink lots of hennessey to blind my mind from reviewin it

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