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    I snorted some thoughts so I could wonder-why
    I tipped the world over so I wouldn't stumble-lines
    I stole boxing gloves so I could fight-this-feeling
    I ripped up pages so I couldn't write-this-feeling
    I sharpended pencils so I could stab the paper strong
    I rolled a blunt of heart so I could smoke the beat to this song
    I spoke slowly so I could tip-off-a-grin
    I clipped my nails so I couldn't rip-off-your-skin
    I swallowed my spit so I wouldn't choke-on-my-tongue
    I gripped a pencil so I couldn't choke-you-or-lungs
    I 'cut' through people in line so I couldn't 'make-this-hurt'
    I stomped on my own heart so you couldn't break-it-first
    I held my tears so you wouldn't see me fold-back
    I died so I wouldn't feel pain when I asked what she had that I don't-have
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

  • #2
    trippy...little to sad for me man..lol
    Ima T.R.A.P.S.T.R
    Got the city on lock, N big shoes on the car

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    • #3
      ^I'm a girl. But maybe you were just sayin' man for the sake of sayin' "man". I do that sometimes, so it's all good, buddy!

      Uppin'.
      Love, live life, proceed, progress

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      • #4
        It's too short, but it's still tight. It's a sad feelin' that I've never really felt to a high extent when it came to a girl likin' another guy. Good luck with over comin' this pain. At least you did a good job with puttin' the emotion in this, but you may feel it's not worth it. That's true.

        Peace.
        P!

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        • #5
          ^Thanks. I'll get the verse for our collab in soon.

          Uppin'.
          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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          • #6
            I agree another deep but Good drop from symptom u just keep dropping that hot stuff on the board. U extremely talented i agree way to short but nice as always. 1

            P.S. CAn u please leave feed on ma new track with Epic Skripz

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            • #7
              evidently the only thing worth checking here is John's any
              different

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              • #8
                That was a hot verse... I liked that shit.

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                • #9
                  ^You can delete those yourself if you go to "Edit" at the bottom of your post, along with your freepost that you posted to ask how to delete it.

                  Uppin'.
                  Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                  • #10
                    I think its funny how max is still here even though he hates it...

                    Deep...Good Metaphors/similies/punches...w/e you'd like to call them
                    Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
                    New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
                    Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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                    • #11
                      It was kinda to short
                      and gotta work on it its kinda
                      tight there but kepp it coming
                      it was gewd

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                      • #12
                        Too short, you should have put this in the Poetry section...it was pretty sad actually and really nice, different and fresh. nice work, i'd jus say either make it longer or just call it a poem, raps unless incomplete are not uslaly that short. But yep you're still dope!!!
                        twitter.com/thisistc

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                        • #13
                          Thanks for this feed.

                          Uppin'.
                          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                          • #14
                            Return Feed Please...Trust Me...This Is An Interesting Read...Not My Normal Thing

                            http://www.d12world.com/board/showth...41#post5124041
                            Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
                            New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
                            Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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                            • #15
                              ^When I get back from school today, sure thing.

                              I got a new SN. . . I'll be sure to IM you whenever I get online after school.
                              Love, live life, proceed, progress

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