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  • "Controdiction"

    Verse 1

    Beat= Rap Game D-12 Ft. 50

    Take A Step Out My Door And Watch The Police Go By
    Crooked Smiles On Their Faces From Knowing All Those Lies
    They Pull You Over Cuz They Say You Didn't Stop At The Light
    Then They Go Home And Ilegally Smoke Some Pot Every Night
    Itz Kinda Like Doc's Who Say That Abortion Ain't Right
    And They Bring Their Wife To Some Steps And Push Her Down The Flight
    Or The Business Man Who Says Sharing Needles Spreads Disease
    But Every Night He's Got A New Slut Sucking Down His Genes
    Or The Politician Who Tells Us To Listen To The Truths Were Told
    But When They Vote Itz For The Other Party In The Booth And Polls
    And The President Who Says There's Nuclear Arms In Iran (Prounounced I-Ron)
    When Really Its His Father Who's Got A Grudge Against Saddam
    And The Public Thinkin' We've Calmed Down All Racial Reaction
    But When Two Go For A Job There's Still Affirmative Action
    Itz Just What I Thought It Answers All My Suspicions
    This Whole Fucking World Is Just Full Of Controdictions...
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  • #2
    It's very tight, homie. I like the concept of the topic and the song proves a point I like. I like the way you begin it with what you see outside your house and then go from there to the rest of the verse. I'll be waitin' for the rest of the song. Maybe record it as well.

    Peace.
    P!

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    • #3
      FIRE

      straight up nasty
      if theres good in every evil
      then theres evil in every good

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      • #4
        Thnks..Repped...
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        • #5
          It's spelled Contradiction
          Anybody wanna lumpkin?

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          • #6
            One of the better drop I've seen you put down in a while, there's a lot of really nice lines in this piece right here.


            Or The Business Man Who Says Sharing Needles Spreads Disease
            But Every Night He's Got A New Slut Sucking Down His Genes

            ^ nice shit right there.


            Overall it's all good man, I'd give this right here like a 7.9. If you would, leave some feed on my newest drop "See You Soon." Would ya?
            The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

            I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

            With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


            Got It?

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            • #7
              Thnks For Feed
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              • #8
                That was real nice man. Only complaint I'd have is the constant capitalization of words lol.. I don't know, it just bugs me. But, this piece wasn't long enough to the point I wouldn't finish it

                I enjoyed it. Lot of truth said in it, and you ended it off nicely.

                Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                Let the night be too dark for me to see
                Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                • #9
                  I'll Be Finishing It...And As For The CAps...Not Sure Why I Do It...I Just Do Lol...
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                  • #10
                    Hm, this is really real. I enjoyed the subject, and I thought you executed it well. I can't wait to read the other two verses.

                    There are no major flaws, and everything was put together well - I liked how you compared and contrasted things to make your point.

                    But about the Bush thing - I support Bush. And you can never be too sure about Iran and what they'll do next - they hate America. So it's better safe than sorry.

                    But, yea, your rap was done quite well.
                    Last edited by Symptom; 03-29-2006, 04:30 PM.
                    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                    • #11
                      ^^
                      I Support Him Too...I'm Just Sayin'....Ya Never Know...
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                      • #12
                        *Bump*
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                        • #13
                          Nice concept and some cool examples..but it's contradictions.
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                          • #14
                            Thats what i like man, real deep, story like full of emotion, i like that shit alot

                            Or The Politician Who Tells Us To Listen To The Truths Were Told
                            But When They Vote Itz For The Other Party In The Booth And Polls
                            Thats my fave line, got such a meanin to it
                            good shit again man
                            OH HAI!

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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by Illusory
                              Nice concept and some cool examples..but it's contradictions.
                              Yeah...I'm An Idiot lol
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