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  • "My Cd's Scratched"-R2

    While look at this I acutally found this damn song piled under a bunch of 40's and brown liquor bags while I was cleaning my room today. This is more of joke record nothign serious, like I said I ain't a politican I'm a musician. Check it out.



    "My Cd's Scratched"-R2 (Unfinished)

    Verse #1:
    Woke up popped in my favorite cd applied some Pharcyde,
    But it's scratched so I'm missin there bizzare ride,
    Like a politican I'm only hearin half the facts,
    Only hearin' half at that like fiens on crack,
    Singin' along but the words they sound ubsurd,
    Did he just sayin bendin' curbs?, or somethin' about verbs?,
    These messages are comin' out more awkard then a blind date,
    Fast forward the track no progress I'm gettin irrate,
    Bangin' on my cd player the words just bounce,
    This cd's about to get snapped in pieces denounced,
    I need an upgrade from cd's to the mp3's,
    So I can rob artists and commit criminal piracy,
    Yo, thanks a lot apple, my cd's just snappled,
    Threw em down and they all got stampled,
    Now that the cd's are on wrap and I'm gone with the stacks,
    I can sit back kick it and relax to the track, for the fact,
    My cd's ain't scratched.



    Hook:
    Tryin' ta chill and listen to music,
    But my cd player won't let me choose it,
    My cd's all tattered and sratched,
    Man I hate that ,don't you hate that?
    (No Doubt)


    Verse #2:
    My Ipod got jacked not it's right back to the stacks,
    My cd's scratched and I'm trapped stuck to adapt,
    To bumpin' some Nas then out no where bumpin a pause,
    And it's to bad cause his story was leadin' to loose bras,
    And I was feelin ready ta get down and randy,
    The girl he was describin' sounded sweet as candy,
    Talkin' about lickin her up and down like a sucker,
    Gettin' wild with the tounge soundin' like a trucker,
    Damn here come the skip (sfx-record skip) did he say tits?




    Ending Comments:
    It's not finished but I'm well on my way, like I said it's a joke so just take it for what it is.




    Ridiculous Rick
    "Slim Frame, Big Game"
    Last edited by New Guy; 03-29-2006, 01:48 PM.
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  • #2
    this is nice for a joke rap man i would def listen to in audio it would be a good laugh. something to just sit back and unwind to after a stressful day
    yall done fucked up now endagered the industry better be prepared it's the return of conspiracy

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    • #3
      Yeah, good for what it is. Good enough to cheer people up. If it was recorded with a nice flow and a tight beat then that would be tight.

      Peace.
      P!

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      • #4
        Hmmm...Not Really Feelin' It...

        Didn't Like The Hook At All...

        Verse Were Corny...I'm Not Tryin' To Be A Prick, Just Givin' My Opinion...I Like Most Of Your Stuff, But I'm Def. Not Feelin' This Piece...Sorry...
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        • #5
          Not bad, considering what the idea is about.

          Clever idea, but the idea to me personally, is somewhat boring. I just don't think I'd want to hear an entire song on it. Unless it was made really upbeat and catchy possibly.

          But, it was good nonetheless.. always good to write about new, different things.
          Now let the night be dark for all of me.
          Let the night be too dark for me to see
          Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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          • #6
            Woah! I really liked this piece and it's creativity. I think you presented it with a nice execution.

            I'm feelin' all of the second verse, for it portrays what can really happen with a scratched CD in use of play.

            Fave line:

            I need an upgrade from cd's to the mp3's,
            So I can rob artists and commit criminal piracy,
            Yo, thanks a lot apple, my cd's just snappled,
            Threw em down and they all got stampled,
            Now that the cd's are on wrap and I'm gone with the stacks,
            I can sit back kick it and relax to the track, for the fact,
            My cd's ain't scratched.

            Keep it up.
            Love, live life, proceed, progress

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            • #7
              Mixed reviews any clues?
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              • #8
                People need to make and listen to more funny songs... now everyone's trying to make a statement or fall into cliched territory.

                I know you're getting mixed reviews, but I liked it and thought it was funny...

                but here's some advice: put your CDs back in their cases and they wont get scratched. The only CD I have that's scratched enough to cause playback problems is a burnt copy of The Massacre I got from the bottom of a pool.

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                • #9
                  I wouldn't be to concerned about having your copy of "The Massacure" being to scratched for play back, as a matter of fact throw that shit back in the pool.
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                  • #10
                    I wouldn't be to concerned about having your copy of "The Massacure" being to scratched for play back, as a matter of fact throw that shit back in the pool.
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                    • #11
                      Is there an echo in this room?
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                      • #12
                        ^lolness!
                        Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by Rhymez_Internal
                          I wouldn't be to concerned about having your copy of "The Massacure" being to scratched for play back, as a matter of fact throw that shit back in the pool.
                          It wasnt my pool, and its hard to throw a CD through ice in the winter..

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                          • #14
                            you got some pretty good vocab in there man.
                            N i actually really like the concept of the track

                            To bumpin' some Nas then out no where bumpin a pause,
                            And it's to bad cause his story was leadin' to loose bras,
                            And I was feelin ready ta get down and randy,
                            The girl he was describin' sounded sweet as candy,
                            That bit made me laugh my ass off, some funny rhymes comin on this board.
                            Nice track man, i'd like to hear it in audio
                            OH HAI!

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                            • #15
                              Thanks good lookin' out
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