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  • Haven't posted in a while so....

    Here's something I wrote recently (Reps for Feed, Will Rep for Feed, etc.):

    Illusions in my mind running cross the page
    I never hold inside when I smart their ways
    Too many in my sight, I canít stop their play
    My tongue gets tied I canít talk or say
    Anything, dribbling it off the court
    The smell of victory when I top the force
    My throatís on its own if it coughs or hoarse
    I canít raise the roof but I drop the floor
    A new manís coming, but whatís his name?
    From a new land gunning, yeah fuck this game
    A box of cheddar chips when I crush this thing
    Another header in, Iíve just rushed this place
    My hands feel icy when I hold the mic
    My face is fiery, but Iím cold inside
    My heart starts thumping and my pulse is high
    Ready, set, letís go; fucking jump the line
    Ainít cheating or deceiving, I hold my own
    Not reading your proceeding, just go fly home
    Youíre not from vicinity, I hope I blow
    Cuz this is my infinity, it goes quite slow

    [Break]

    No hook on this song, havenít thought of that
    I donít need one, this ainít pop but rap
    The new clean one, it donít stop at that
    Adjust your fucking mic if youíre talking back
    My introduction, Iím X.I.L.
    Donít worry bout my words, my textís quite ill
    An exile; Iíve been nexted by twelve fucking
    Silly motherfuckers who canít check my skill
    Heard or seen? Nope, Iíve been felt by nil
    Fulfill my dreams, then can get my kill
    A thousand per track, I can spell my will
    But any less than that, Iíve just fell my hill
    Born in L.A., from the Ďburbs no doubt
    Doesnít take away from what my wordís about
    Quake doesnít shake all the verbs around
    But it fucked up my life when the hurt came down
    After that disaster, another one came
    Spread to my family, no oneís to blame
    Moved quite a lot, when the weekend came
    Now Iím grown up, but it bends the same
    Words are my God, and I pray to that
    Donít say what Iím not, I pray to that
    Itís the race to the top, I pray to that
    Iíve rhymed all the ďahsĒ without saying jack

    [Break]

    Good night, beddy bye, and go to bed
    Less worth rappers, can flow to rest
    S-word clappers, can close their head
    Wrap it in a bag so their soul is dead
    Lyrically Iím decent, just pieciní some shit
    Recent acappella key sets, Iím feediní from it
    Even elemental thesis, ainít leadiní my wits
    Leave it to bits; I ainít freakiní bringing my kit
    Iíll do it in fact, new to rap, but who gives a crap?
    Brewed to tap, cool like that and in mood to jack
    Voodoo cap, can ďsueĒ or glue a shoe to your back
    ďSewĒ, I donít know, but my movement is wack
    Screw that and move back, straight to the point
    How do they do that, if theyíre blazing a joint?
    What is all this besides hihfy blown shit
    Low-riders, bitches, and shiny chrome rims?
    When Iím in my zone, I write about life
    Gangster-shit is old, I write about mine
    X.I.L. present on the mic tonight
    One hit wonder? I donít buy the hype
    Current Battle Record (KO's-Wins-Losses): 3-3-2

  • #2
    Originally posted by Z|ppo
    Haven't posted in a while so....
    Yes... we can tell.
    Anybody wanna lumpkin?

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    • #3
      lol you didnt even read it did you?
      http://www.myspace.com/crackdoubt
      www.myspace.com/swassblasty
      www.myspace.com/motrt
      www.myspace.com/oxihiphop
      www.myspace.com/swayzorspitsbladez

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Bill Jones
        Yes... we can tell.
        Ohhhhhhhh SNAP!!

        Nice one, shitface.
        Current Battle Record (KO's-Wins-Losses): 3-3-2

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        • #5
          No feed?
          Current Battle Record (KO's-Wins-Losses): 3-3-2

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          • #6
            Kind of reminded me of "Rabbit Run" by Eminem. Especially the first verse. I could see the emotion you were trying to portray. The only thing I'd say is, expand your vocabulary. The "ill/skill/will/hill/kill/nil" rhyme made me cringe. Good job, though.
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