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  • "Haunting Memories" feat. Symptom

    [Symptom]
    The days pass me by with an unfamiliar melody
    Calculating how long it's been since I've relived memories
    Precision that prefers to remind-me-of-times
    Never skipping a part, like a video that rewinds-in-my-mind
    Thinkin' of how we used to live-the-days
    Just you and I, no other thing to worry to rip-the-rays
    Of the sunshine that seemed to slip-for-days
    Shinin' through the light of gray, so it could stick-our-way
    But other people got involved, and things changed
    Your love traveled else where, while mine still remained
    Grippin' the hands of time, but I have no control
    Just thinkin' of your face makes me have no choice but to unfold
    I can't get over our talks of nothing, then on to next-thing
    I keep falling for the same person, and he's not there to catch-me
    Those everlasting good times, hang over my face like a vail
    I wish we were more than friends, so these memories wouldn't be stale
    Ever since I discovered this emotion, I haven't been the same
    I can't go back to normal, when to begin with, I was never sane

    [Chorus: Symptom]
    We can't change the past and we let it haunt us for now
    It's doesn't have to be this way, but we just allow
    It gets in our way so we take the road to insanity
    but there's so escape and we don't understand it, see

    [Pandemic]
    My mind is just abused and I feel Iím just cursed
    I canít show my face and only my words come first
    I hide behind my thoughts I find deep in my brain
    Many thoughts just hurt and really keep me in pain
    Yet if I let them loose, I present my self weak
    My own thoughts my demise and I have nothiní to seek
    Itís hopeless when I know Iím my own opponent
    If there was the right direction Iíve known to go with
    Youíre supposed to control life, but you can let life control you
    You may pick the path, but it might be where you sell your soul to
    You might spark conflict and there might be no one to hold to
    No control of the situtation like nobody knows you
    I remember the days when I was I bullied by peers
    That shit lasted for years and the pain is still here
    Those thoughts are so clear as ghosts and hauntiní as memories
    They bring me down the same way as my enemies
    I felt so alone and I kept losiní my friends
    No one cared how I felt and I was abused to the end
    They kept jabbiní me more and my self-esteem was so poor
    My heart, mind and soul sore, and theyíre what I put in my songs
    A child shouldn't have these memories when they're just wrong
    Thatís why I couldnít keep strong and I couldnít go on
    I felt so weak and I couldn't do anythin' about it
    I wanted to be a real man, but I'm always just doubted
    I just don't try anymore and I didn't really try when I wrote this
    There's just no point when I know I won't die as the dopest

    [Chorus: Pandemic]
    We can't change the past and we let it haunt us for now
    It's doesn't have to be this way, but we just allow
    It gets in our way so we take the road to insanity
    but there's so escape and we don't understand it, see

    Peace.
    P!

  • #2
    Nice Piece People

    Fav. Part
    You’re supposed to control life, but you can let life control you
    You may pick the path, but it might be where you sell your soul to
    You might spark conflict and there might be no one to hold to
    No control of the situtation like nobody knows you
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    • #3
      ^Thanks.

      Uppin' this bad boy.
      Love, live life, proceed, progress

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      • #4
        Nice work, the both of you.

        Definately felt and related to this.

        But other people got involved, and things changed
        Your love traveled else where, while mine still remained
        Grippin' the hands of time, but I have no control

        Those thoughts are so clear as ghosts and hauntin’ as memories
        They bring me down the same way as my enemies
        I felt so alone and I kept losin’ my friends
        No one cared how I felt and I was abused to the end
        They kept jabbin’ me more and my self-esteem was so poor
        My heart, mind and soul sore, and they’re what I put in my songs
        A child shouldn't have these memories when they're just wrong


        Those had to be the parts that stuck out for me, from each of you.

        You compliment eachother well. You both and Rick are probably the only people I know of in this forum I'd really take an interest in reading or see myself ever collaborating with.

        Good work.
        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
        Let the night be too dark for me to see
        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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        • #5
          solid drop nice one!

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          • #6
            All i got to say is
            Ketchup was sold in the 1930's as medicine
            www.youtube.com/imaginaryfosterkids

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            • #7
              This is real nice!!

              Those thoughts are so clear as ghosts and hauntin’ as memories
              They bring me down the same way as my enemies
              "Reality Is Fraud, Dreams Are Fo Real"

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              • #8
                Yo, thanks for all the feed. It's nice to know y'all like it.

                Peace.
                P!

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                • #9
                  the pieces connected well.. i like the deepness n multies that was used in the verses.. i wasnt to sure bout the hook, but i guess its pretty good considerin the concept of the lyrics.. flow in sum places i felt was off, but it clda jus been the way i was readin it.. n i think vocab clda been better, but its a real nice piece in my opinion...

                  keep it up

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                  • #10
                    Lovin' the feed, uppin' this bad boy.
                    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                    • #11
                      Thanks, Konman. I really don't care for my vocab in my raps.

                      Peace.
                      P!

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                      • #12
                        I guess it wouldn't hurt to up this. Last verse I ever actually completed.

                        Peace.
                        P!

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                        • #13
                          ^LMAO!

                          People are following in my footsteps by uppin' ish.
                          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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