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    Yo this is a verse from one of my ep tracks called "Star Struck", the songs just about any unsigned rapper and what they're thinkin tryin to make it, ya know? tell me what ya'll thhink of it! - peace

    A-yo, ever since 15, I've been havin' sick dreams/
    Then I wake up sweatin and pen another 16/
    a sick teen, on a lyrical trek/
    from a cassette to your deck, but aint no miracle yet/
    satirical friends, who refuse to believe I'm for real/
    So I gotta stay still willin' to squeeze steel/
    Hopin I appeal to labels and A&R's/
    Sprayin cars, sick of doin talent shows and playin bars/
    obeyin laws, when I just wanna break some jaws/
    stayin raw, prayin pop doesn't sway my thoughts/
    betrayin' god, puttin' fame above tha lord/
    cuz I feel I've been ignored, when I just wanna be adored/
    goin outta my ghord, cuz i keep thinkin of these odds/
    for me to make it to the top is like a billion to squat/
    I keep hearin that I'm hott, but Im feelin a chill/
    So I stay willin' to kill, until my dreams are fullfilled-

    North Ace
    "Star Struck"
    The Frozen EP
    Last edited by North Ace; 07-24-2001, 10:39 AM.

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    =)

    I personally liked that shit, keep em coming fo sho

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    • #3
      Top Shit

      I liked that i thought it was pretty cool man, any more

      Sween Dogg
      Only a few of us left

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