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  • The Stuff That Make the World Go 'Round

    I wrote this to the "On Fire" beat by Lloyd Banks, I believe. This was supposed to be a collab with Blaze87, but he hasn't posted it up and it's been a while, and I'm anxious for feed on this.

    So, here ya go.

    When I open this notebook, I wonder who-will-care
    I'll 'cock my eyelids back' so I can 'shoot-you-stares'
    The more I write with 'flow', the more-you'll-'cry'
    'Battin'' my lyrics so they'll 'flash' before-your-'eyes'
    Gropin' metaphores so I can have the right to grip-this-pencil
    Call me 'Bush,' 'cause everytime I open my mouth, I lift-up-missils
    Takin' disses personal as I battle-rap-myself
    Callin' you wack, when I can't even battle-rap-myself
    Shift gears toward rhymin', cause it lifts-my-life
    I ain't talkin' 'bout 'paper' when I say I rip-your-'lines'
    Told to get in regular business, they sayin' "I bet-she'll-change"
    While I sit on Common's Corner rappin' for extra-change
    Experimentin' on the linguistics of rap deeply
    Make my raps 'invisble' so like 'John Cena, You Can't See-Me'
    Hummin' tunes from my notebook, the sound just lingers
    Brushin' my page's shoulders off, while I get graphite on my fingers
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

  • #2
    This is pretty harsh since your one of my people's, but really I only like the last two lines, and it fell like just the same rap different name.
    The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

    I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

    With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


    Got It?

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    • #3
      ^I don't understand the last part of your feedback.

      But hey - we all have our opinions! I'd rather the truth rather than some false liking of my rap.

      Uppin'.
      Love, live life, proceed, progress

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