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    Just think about this for a moment...
    Did you ever feel like everything you say is absorbed by walls?
    Did you ever feel like everything you do is never enough for some people?
    How about feeling like no one ever wants to listen to you...
    Or wants to know how you feel....
    I can relate to that.....
    Anything I do isn't enough....
    Anything I say goes through one ear and out the other...
    I sure as hell feel like no one gives a shit of what I think....
    Because everyone thinks what I think is wrong....
    I might as well write it down on paper.....
    Maybe my paper will care....


    written by me... Laila....
    R.I.P. DESHAUN "PROOF" HOLTON
    (F)10/2/75-4/11/06(F)
    "THEY SAY THE GOOD DIE YOUNG...." WE'LL MISS YOU

  • #2
    Is this supposed to be a verse or poetry? Because theres a poetry section. I'm not expert on poetry and I dont claim to be, but if it was supposed to be a verse it was pretty bad. Had no rhymes, no flow, no multies, no wordplay etc etc.

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    • #3
      poetry isnt rhymes and multis
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      • #4
        Are you functionally illiterate or just plain stupid?

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        • #5
          ^Do You Stay Trying To Start Shit? Everytime I See You Post, It's Always Bull Shit. It's A Computer, Not Real Life. Keep Your Stupidity Comments To Yourself.
          Go Cubs! It's Their Season Baby!

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          • #6
            How very hypocritical of you. Take a step back and think before you post next time.

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            • #7
              frozen north, its neither a verse nor poetry... its an expression of my emotions... and grass is right.. poetry doesnt have to have rhyming works in it. and no im not illiterate, or stupid... is it wrong for me to express myself? i was just writing how i felt...
              R.I.P. DESHAUN "PROOF" HOLTON
              (F)10/2/75-4/11/06(F)
              "THEY SAY THE GOOD DIE YOUNG...." WE'LL MISS YOU

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              • #8
                Bllllllllllllat
                Southern Intellect
                Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

                Prototype

                http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by WhiteGurl4D12
                  frozen north, its neither a verse nor poetry... its an expression of my emotions... and grass is right.. poetry doesnt have to have rhyming works in it. and no im not illiterate, or stupid... is it wrong for me to express myself? i was just writing how i felt...
                  I never said poetry had to rhymes, crist. I said if it was a verse it didnt rhyme. I didn't call you stupid or illiterate either, but after reading your latest post I'm considering it.

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                  • #10
                    sorry for my mistake about that whole illiterate, rhyme shit... thats just what it sounded like you said... my bad..
                    R.I.P. DESHAUN "PROOF" HOLTON
                    (F)10/2/75-4/11/06(F)
                    "THEY SAY THE GOOD DIE YOUNG...." WE'LL MISS YOU

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                    • #11
                      I feel like dat sumtimes
                      Southern Intellect

                      Its The Southern TakeOver
                      Cruz

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                      • #12
                        really? ur da first person to tell me dat since i posted this thread!!lol..
                        R.I.P. DESHAUN "PROOF" HOLTON
                        (F)10/2/75-4/11/06(F)
                        "THEY SAY THE GOOD DIE YOUNG...." WE'LL MISS YOU

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by gilmister
                          Bllllllllllllat

                          word
                          Southern Intellect
                          Aussie HIPHOP at its finest

                          Prototype

                          http://www.myspace.com/prototypeakatheone

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                          • #14
                            I'm feelin it.
                            Didn't you know
                            i was waiting on you
                            Waiting on a dream
                            that'll never come true
                            Didn't you know
                            i was waiting on you
                            My face turnt to stone
                            when i heard the news

                            Kanye West-Bad News

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                            • #15
                              Hm.. . sometimes.
                              Love, live life, proceed, progress

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