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im new in d12 world-im just starting-please check my style and see if y'all like it.

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  • im new in d12 world-im just starting-please check my style and see if y'all like it.

    Hi-i logged in wrong and for some reason my name came up as black-chocollate (doh!!)-that was my pass for a porn site and it came up automatically!!
    Anyway my name is really KEGZI-ive just started doing this shit a few months back and ive been in d12board.com tryna improve but i just wanted to see if my shit is good enough for in here??
    Please give me some feedback.Thanks.

    aiyo...
    im two steps of emcees-burst past and try to step on me/
    but when i react u gettin jacked with this first class weaponry/
    thats life dawg,ask D12 --"Hey,Shit Can Happen Right??"/
    shit just happened now-we read your rhyme and lost our appetite/
    but my shit tastes jus' like candy-i stand free-you knows this/
    but when YOU freestyle in a hip-hop club-you clear the room with halitosis/
    im closest-to the sun but i shine more when im in orbit/
    and i blind emcees when i spit and they just ignored it/
    afford it?-yeah right!-my shit is fuckin air tight/
    but ill break the seal and let you in-just so its a fair fight/
    it aint fair though-when i lay low and grab a blender/
    and change your dadas gender and post it twice "return to sender"/
    im'a offend a-lot of hipocrits-who try to act like its.../
    their turn to shine-but i jus' block out the light a ***** shits/
    i aint racist-but im a skitzofenic and jus' two-facist/
    and i dont know my ass from my elbow til i turn round and see where my waist is!/
    i misplaced this-in my brain,when i got dc'd from my mainframe/
    woke up-still got the same name??-who gives a fuck-i still got mad game!/
    i keep my shit simple to stir your parent and get your vowels housed/
    drop a noun and eat a chicken-and end up talkin "foul" mouthed/
    i was always wrong at school-bad mannered but got a few right/
    until i bought myself a torch and seen my whole life in a new light!/
    i grew in height-gripped tight and started to put pen to paper/
    my rhymes grew tight-i made a change-i swapped the Hen for vapour/
    this caper-aint a comic-so take it serious/
    im hung well and you're in fear of this-turned Green and b'came delerious/
    im a psycho-like no-body you ever heard before/
    im a retard in a home-im dirtier than the dozen-i wish theyd clean me more!/
    you ever dreamed before-and woke up-and youre not sure if its reality?/
    i do!-my life is jus' a fallacy so when i diss please dont get mad at me/
    im an imsomniac-and my bodyclock dont even know what time i floss til/
    i guess i stop when i naturally drop-and smoke cum out ma nostrils!?/
    i drop pills with city men-marked 'E' like a vitamin/
    sit-em-in a line and when igrab my glock im hitting him/
    i'll shit on Em-D12,puff-Daddy and notorious/
    picture that scene-(aaahh!! glorious!)-"but now theres only four of us!"/
    four of who?!-who the fuck'my talkin to?!-"yourself-were you-youre voice is just the core of us!"(doh!!!)/
    the chorus mus' be missin from this new freestylin that im pissin/
    so if i decide to add to this shit-please sit back and listen/
    i glisten-when i step on stage-or jot a new page/
    coz i just loose my mind-and mouth-off in a fuckin rage!/
    this cage-could never hold me-so these mind tricks wont control me/
    fuck fila-i'll steal a stash full of hash and TripleFive Soul T's/
    i got trophies-for when i sing i change my temprement/
    i present myself on stage unconciously and dont even know i exist or represent!


    WHAT Y'ALL THINK? ANY GOOD?
    WHATEVER Y'ALL THINK-PLEASE JUST GIVE ME SUM FEEDBACK OR ADVICE ON HOW I CAN IMPROVE.
    PEACE-KEGZI.

  • #2
    Yo,Dog u dont need to improve.I Liked that shit it was real tight and had a nice flow..Keep that shit up it was hella tight.

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    • #3
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      That was cool man, you should have no worrys
      u have good use of vocab


      SWEEN DOGG[COLOR=green][FONT=courier new[SIZE=3]
      Only a few of us left

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      • #4
        Please vote!!!!!!

        Please vote in

        Sween Dogg VS?:

        BANDIT INVITATION:

        SWEEN DOGG

        Peace
        Only a few of us left

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        • #5
          keg man its da assasin welcome to da d12world
          if i kill u will u scream???

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          • #6
            Aiyo thanks y'all-i appreciate feedback a lot-espescially when its positive aihgt!? :-P
            How you doing Soul?!-didnt know you were freestylin in here too dawg.y'all got some good shit going on-keep it up and keep representin your own style and ideas.
            peace-k to tha z.
            post again soon.:D

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