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    This is not aimed at anyone, but it would be a good diss just in case for some reason I make some enemies........ That's not what im coming here for though, and Id rather NOT make enemies. Anyways check it out:

    Aight here goes/ heres a little rap/
    developed to keep your on toes/
    to distract u, from raping innocent hoes/
    it's a little help from drell/
    designed to give you, a little first hand tour of this jailcell/
    hell, ill even sell you a a couple-a pills/
    if you save these ALL your needs'll be fulfilled/
    and for each month..... you wont even be billed/
    now before all this/ let's take a couple seconds for you too get pissed/ then a couple more second for you too make your last wish/
    before I get mad and a beatdown is dished/
    heres your head/ in a silver platter/
    nothing matters/ this is just one week of food/ u wont have too gather/
    That's right, im saying your on welfare/ why should I, when no one else cares?/ Cause I have to live with my own fears/ so im-a take my anger out on you, fool, oh well, I guess your screwed.
    Ha-HA. Take a breather...... and your beating'll be even MEANER! Sucka.

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    Could someone give me some feedback, that seemed pretty good to me.

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    • #3
      Realness

      Yo on the real, i didnt like it. I aint hating on you but it just didnt catch my attention. it seemed like just another guy rapping about how hard he is.the flow was good and all that, its just the content wasnt anything special (to me anyway, but a lotta people do like this stuff) But hey thought id respond cuz i know how annoying it is when you get loads of views but no replys. it happens to me all the fucking time.

      PEACE
      The only thing worse than the wretched pain in my mouth is the excrement spewing from yours-Stewie Griffen

      ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME

      R.I.P ~ Tupac Shakur-my biggest musical inspiration…you are missed everyday

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      • #4
        yeah, the content wasn't mean to be anything special. It was just meant too be a fun little battle rap. Want something with a little more meaning? Im-a start a new thread.

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