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    Last class of the day, my heat beats faster
    Seein' his smile, crackin' me up with cheap laughter
    Exchanging "hello's" as I quietly take my seat
    Puttin' my back pack down, on the other chair I place my feat
    Grab a pencil, as I edge toward the board to learn
    Starin' at this figure, that sparks my heart with a burn
    Could barely get him off my mind since the day I met him
    The moment I heard him say my name, I couldn't forget him
    Longing to talk to him, but my butterflies take over as I shout 'em
    Gettin' to the point where at night, I have dreams about him
    Take out my math book, turn to the designated page
    Gettin' asked how old he is, I listen as he says the faded age
    Continue to strain my ears for his softended voice
    To date a guy like this it's not an often choice
    Barely able to focus when he explains certain problems
    Gazing into his eyes, with no intentions to dodge 'em
    He makes funny remarks, I always have to chuckle
    Tryin' to stand for this feeling, but my knees seem to buckle
    The clock ticks as the class's end has to reach us
    It's a strange feelin' havin' a crush on my math teacher
    Last edited by Symptom; 04-19-2006, 03:44 PM.
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

  • #2
    nice flow and nice multies... i like this better then ur recent drops.. but i saw a couple of forced rhymes, not really effective tho.. this is a real nice drop. i like it
    keep it up

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    • #3
      You need to start writing things you could put on audio, or on a CD, cuz I can't see myself listening to that on a CD...doesn't seem rap-ish/hip hop...ya know waht I mean??? Good lyrically...but I dunno...
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      • #4
        ^ what he said.
        The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

        I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

        With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


        Got It?

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        • #5
          Yea, indeed.

          It was just a drop for fun.
          Love, live life, proceed, progress

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          • #6
            Yo, I don't understand why you guys think that it doesn't seem rap-ish/Hip Hop. It has rap qualities toit and you guys have similar writin' styles, but Symptom has a different type of creativity as well.

            I really the the way you described the situations with how the feelin' is portrayed the the way you word 'em. It all goes together well. Even if this drop is just for fun, I hope you're still proud of it. It possibly could be one of my favorites from you even though it's just one verse.

            Be easy. Peace.
            P!

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            • #7
              ^That's nice to read, and I appreciated your positivity.
              Love, live life, proceed, progress

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              • #8
                It's pretty good for a fun drop. But mostly everything u drop around here is Good
                ...Younice???..Sign uphere

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                • #9
                  ^yay!
                  Love, live life, proceed, progress

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