"That Spark"

[Symptom]

^yay!

[Yamil]

It's pretty good for a fun drop. But mostly everything u drop around here is Good

[Symptom]

^That's nice to read, and I appreciated your positivity.

[pandemic]

Yo, I don't understand why you guys think that it doesn't seem rap-ish/Hip Hop. It has rap qualities toit and you guys have similar writin' styles, but Symptom has a different type of creativity as well.

I really the the way you described the situations with how the feelin' is portrayed the the way you word 'em. It all goes together well. Even if this drop is just for fun, I hope you're still proud of it. It possibly could be one of my favorites from you even though it's just one verse.

Be easy. Peace.

[Symptom]

Yea, indeed.

It was just a drop for fun.

[New Guy]

^ what he said.

[Axis]

You need to start writing things you could put on audio, or on a CD, cuz I can't see myself listening to that on a CD...doesn't seem rap-ish/hip hop...ya know waht I mean??? Good lyrically...but I dunno...

[DeVere]

nice flow and nice multies... i like this better then ur recent drops.. but i saw a couple of forced rhymes, not really effective tho.. this is a real nice drop. i like it
keep it up

[Symptom]

Last class of the day, my heat beats faster
Seein' his smile, crackin' me up with cheap laughter
Exchanging "hello's" as I quietly take my seat
Puttin' my back pack down, on the other chair I place my feat
Grab a pencil, as I edge toward the board to learn
Starin' at this figure, that sparks my heart with a burn
Could barely get him off my mind since the day I met him
The moment I heard him say my name, I couldn't forget him
Longing to talk to him, but my butterflies take over as I shout 'em
Gettin' to the point where at night, I have dreams about him
Take out my math book, turn to the designated page
Gettin' asked how old he is, I listen as he says the faded age
Continue to strain my ears for his softended voice
To date a guy like this it's not an often choice
Barely able to focus when he explains certain problems
Gazing into his eyes, with no intentions to dodge 'em
He makes funny remarks, I always have to chuckle
Tryin' to stand for this feeling, but my knees seem to buckle
The clock ticks as the class's end has to reach us
It's a strange feelin' havin' a crush on my math teacher