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  • Lost In Darkness

    Looking For Someone to collab on this too...(Audio)

    [Hook]

    Just lost in darkness
    Lost my sparkness
    Been Acid rained upon and lost my sharpness
    Feel like highway, just to overdrivin'
    So tred upon and yet rufuse to give in

    Just lost in darkness
    Lost my sparkness
    Been Acid rained upon and lost my sharpness
    So easy to quite, fall to my knees
    Just give up on all of my dreams

    [Verse 1]
    My lights steadily fading out and my hallways dim
    Itz getting lighter but not brighter than itz always been
    The walls are closing in, itz a sickening suffacation
    Put my life on hold, always stuck in patients
    Still anxiously waiting for the switch to flip right on
    Cuz I know at any second that this shit might bomb
    Itz what I get for pushin' buttons, always testin' the boss
    But I don't need a bridge to get my message across
    Itz only narrow minded people that keep me trapped in a corner
    And I'll slap there supporters who try to put me in order
    Cuz I'm my own man cuz I've made my own plan
    I've got my own stand, I've stamped my own brand
    But still fear takes over and shuts my own mind down
    Only a matter of time now before my mind finds out
    That I slipped, and it ripped my chest leaving me heartless
    As I slowly begin' my journy on my way into darkness

    ...Enjoy...
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  • #2
    tight shit man good flow
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    • #3
      nice flow bro as usual. ur shit is always hot. btw i tipsy
      yall done fucked up now endagered the industry better be prepared it's the return of conspiracy

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      • #4
        I like how you wrapped it all up in the first verse, it's' was pretty well written, I'd be more then willing to contribute a verse on this as soon as I get some time. Even though, it'd do you no good because I don't have the ablity to record myself. Let me know anyhow. Overall good job though.
        The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

        I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

        With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


        Got It?

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        • #5
          ^^ lol aight, you could always write one, and I could just have one of my friends record it...or sumthin', if I can't find 2 more people...
          Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
          New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
          Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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          • #6
            I say it's pretty good. Good thought put into all the lines. I like the topic and I would say I can probably feel the same way. Definitely solid for text at least.

            Be easy. Peace.
            P!

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            • #7
              Good Flow man and the lyrics was good 2. What beat u used for this?
              ...Younice???..Sign uphere

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              • #8
                This sounds like a songness that I should get onness - all those "ness"'s that you used in your song!

                But for serious, this song was great, and had some witty lines in it. I especially enjoyed this one:

                But I don't need a bridge to get my message across

                ^That was tight.

                The chorus was pretty hot, and I REALLY enjoyed the highway line a lot, too.

                You had some good flow, even though I don't know what beat you wrote this to, or even if you wrote this to a beat - but I'm sure you did, Mr. Audio. Anywayness, it had good text flow, but was a little choppy here and there, but just having the second line seem shorter than the first line in certain places. But other than that, brilliant flow.

                Good heart, and it felt like it had some good effort put into this.

                Keep it up.
                Love, live life, proceed, progress

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                • #9
                  ^^^
                  Thnks chica...yeah I recorded it already...just waitin' for the other 2 peeps to lay their verses on it
                  Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
                  New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
                  Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

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                  • #10
                    You pick some funny ass beats.

                    Try flows like this more often. This one's better than the flows on a lot of your tracks. I'm not sure about the slurring though.

                    I think the breath control might use work.

                    Keep shit up. Peace.
                    P!

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