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  • I'm new and trying to get better

    I just registered and trying to write something. I'm just starting so here it goes.
    Ayo they call me young craze, strong blaze any competion,
    any rhyme I'm spitting is hot, put in down in compesition,
    nines gripping, wine sipping, my saliva turn to lava,
    times ticking, spines twisting, get on the mic and I'm the father,
    cause its pop pop, shots drop, no d*** rider I don't flock cocks,
    I'm non stop wit that cronic flow, so its not ironic that I'm top notch,
    I'm the new kid who get em juised, bones shattered wit bruises,
    crome I'm proned to shoot it, what the matter? you stupid?Tell me what you think and how I can improve.

  • #2
    I think it was pretty tight.
    Just keep spitting the multies combign them with some punchlines and you'll improve.

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