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  • "Crusty Eyelashes"

    This song was written to one of Atom Tha Immortal's songs - I believe it's intitled "AI". But I'm not too sure. The last lines of the chorus are said like fast, and kind of faded; you really have to hear the song to get the jist of it.

    Enjoy.

    Throw on a beat, and make sure to hand me a 'Notebook'
    I'll be like 'Nicholas Sparks' so I could quickly quote-looks
    Of the memories I have of seein' you with her
    Frownin' upon occasions when I surely couldn't fixt hurt
    Rippin' a page with my pain 'cause my heart's had enough
    You lovin' her is like subtraction, it aint' addin' up
    'Movin'' on isn't as easy as said, or that it seems
    So instead I'll make a 'moving' song extracted by a beat
    Forcing my pencil to touch the paper as I bleed
    Metaphorically stating the actions that were once you and me
    I can't help myself, I love you, and I can't stop me
    So the only time I can 'puck'er up is when I'm playin' Hockey
    To accurately state it, I have to make sure that you listen
    You cracked my heart in half and duct tape can't fix this
    The butterflies in my stomach have died, but it's never said
    I wasn't good enough for you - I'll marry rap instead

    Chorus (2x)
    Lippin' the lyrics to a love I can't have
    Multiplying fractions 'cause my heart's cut in half
    Sippin' on saliva from the mouths of you and her
    But continue to taste the dislikement of you and her

    Adventurin' to a place where I can become stone
    A place where there's no lights to highlight the love that's shown
    To different individuals that doesn't include me
    A place calssified by a pencil and a sheet of loose leaf
    Searchin' through the lines for accurate measures
    Writin' a symphony of melodies that I properly exert
    Emphasis placed on emtion as I let the fluid sooth me
    So I can properly ask, "How could you do this to me?"
    Holding on to you tight so I can let go
    Blaming no one but you, for letting your love go
    Chokin' on my vocal chords as my screams pass
    So when I 'pour' my words on this page, I expect you to catch it with a 'glass'
    This heartache is slicing my blood but I can't give in
    I'll search for the pencil to cave in the loves that's livin'
    The butterflies are now catarpillars, but it's never said
    I was too good for you - so I married rap instead
    Last edited by Symptom; 04-25-2006, 01:26 PM.
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

  • #2
    The title made me laugh.

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    • #3
      ^That's nice.

      Uppin'.
      Love, live life, proceed, progress

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      • #4
        I'm definitely uppin' on some adequate feed here.

        Nice skin, by the way.
        Love, live life, proceed, progress

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        • #5
          I think it's very well written and it's a lovely portail of your dedication to rap and lost love as well. There's really only one line in the song that I didn't really like and that was this..


          So the only time I can 'puck'er up is when I'm playin' Hockey

          ^Though it is clever in a sense but I also found it corny.


          Moving along though, there were many things in this song that I could have highlighted, that I thought were remarkable but I don't have the energy to pick and choose and disect, elaborate you get where I'm going. The song overall is a gem, you've got my stamp of approval. You should write a song called that if you want called "Stamp Of Approval" I'm sure it'd do well in any market. Outstanding lyrics, from an outstanding lyrist.


          Take Care,
          Rick
          The Silver Tounge Troublemaker

          I'm Kobe Bryant Ready

          With This Ego I Can Stand Here In A Speedo And Get Looked At Like A Fuckin' Hero.


          Got It?

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          • #6
            ^Thank you. That is MUCH appreciated.

            Uppin' on some more adequate feed (I hate that word "adequate").
            Love, live life, proceed, progress

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            • #7
              Wow. . . why is this gettin' so overlooked?
              Love, live life, proceed, progress

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              • #8
                Maybe if u repped people ull get more feed
                ...Younice???..Sign uphere

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                • #9
                  ^It's just rep.

                  Yo, this is probably some of the best lyrics you've written because it has a lot of nice quotables. Some nice display of cleverness and creativity. But you're writin' so much about this. You're not gonna write a whole album about this are ya?

                  Peace.
                  P!

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                  • #10
                    ^Yea, yea. I wrote a new rap that I will post up either tomorrow or tonight.

                    It has nothin' to do with this.

                    Uppin'.

                    Plus, I'm havin' a real hard time comin' up with ideas lately.
                    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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