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    yo....this is a little somethin....somethin about a girl....that u want....but u know.......u know u cant get her...it goes like this.........yo

    When it comes to emotion expressed, i dont know where to start
    when she comes 'round, its the same feelin as when bass hits in ya heart
    To contemplate a relationship
    Want somethin big, not on the sneak tip
    But she likes the kind of guys that drive the nice whip
    thinkin it aint fair while brushin ya hair
    but u know to you this shit dont matter cause she dont care
    Like when the time u approached her and it tingled ya spine
    and he said "u betta get away from her cause ***** she's mine"
    And once he said that, u begin to think the inevitable
    Feel the pain in ya soul burn with pain that with fury thats incredible
    Enuff to kill 6 men wit bullets of anger displaced
    Thinkin" im not that guy, we alike cause we share the same taste"
    Your thoughts are wastes of space
    Life is a waste of fate
    Hungry, but too much food on the plate
    So the next day, u begin to think aloud bout to approach this chick
    And her boy comes from outta no where and fuck this shit is makin me sick
    What can u do when u all alone
    "dont talk to him, come to me to talk on the phone"
    I need a chick like her wit her superior thickness
    The love from her iz the only cure to antidote this killer sickness
    To extinguish the pain and flame very fast and wit quickness
    The type of feelin when every guy she dates u automatically dont like
    Seems like the simplest words can make u wanna fight
    Your goals seem outta sight
    but thats juss my blight so i remain to ignite
    the constant torch of my heart and continue in spite
    Speak lyrics so i can feel ya insight
    and i sit back and let my pen write
    so sit tight, as i reminese....the feeling that ya get from a long and forgotten kiss
    If i hadnt felt it, idda never written this
    Its tha type of pain you'll always feel forever
    but its my chance taken for granted now or its never
    How did i get in this indeaver....
    and in this game so far u've got losses but no wins
    better off if ya juss remain friends
    cuz she spawns from *Eden* and this is a *Crush*
    Like i said about this love, u dont want on the hush
    The type of pain iz like bein stabbed wit a lance
    A romance wit circumstance....
    So i'll forever save my last dance.........


    now i wanna know what yall think.....i know yall have felt the same shit........so...gimme feed back
    Last edited by Eyerone; 07-25-2001, 07:54 PM.
    Rhyme & Reason
    Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
    #classreunionmuzik
    Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

  • #2
    I Feel ya dog.....Nice Rhyme...Keep'em up.Ya,That was hot,im definetly feelin that one kid!

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    • #3
      uppin...give me feedback please!
      Rhyme & Reason
      Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
      #classreunionmuzik
      Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

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      • #4
        Good Chrnoic Shit!!

        Yeh man, Love dem Rhymes, keep bringin dat shit out, check out some of my lricz sometime tell me what ya think
        L8er Bruz
        **Tha New Era**

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        • #5
          uppin for feedback
          Rhyme & Reason
          Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
          #classreunionmuzik
          Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

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          • #6
            uppin for opinions
            Rhyme & Reason
            Follow me on Twitter: @Eyerone
            #classreunionmuzik
            Check out my newest freestyle: Eyerone "Can't Tell Me Nothin" http://bln.kr/14VV/

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            • #7
              nice one son

              hot, keep em flowin
              Yo, im bout tell ya this truth/
              I dont give a fuck about him, her, or even this dude/
              cuz Im crazy loony and piss people off cuz Im rude/
              I post on D12World like I knew Big Proof/
              Im tired of just sittin here gettin ignored/
              while cats with half my skills got a platinum score/
              walkin round reppin 4 mics in the Source/
              makes me wanna scream and kill off some more!/
              Even cats at XXL just forget about my skills/
              just chillin there thinkin that white boy is ill/
              OverDose makes a song called Poppin Pills/
              Not a peep out you, didnt even cop a thrill/
              You act like OD is thru with this shit/
              Its just I dunno what else to do with this hit/
              I try a new rhyme structure you blew it to bits/
              didnt give it a chance like you threw out ya bitch/
              so now its no more mista nice MC/
              ima rip myself apart like I thought Vanilla Ice was me/
              so just chill there and flash your fake ass ice to me/
              ima toss you out like a slut thats triflin me/

              ~~"Respect" OverDose

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              • #8
                yo man, that shit was emotional man, i felt that once be4 .. it;s just a pain.. well keep up the work man,
                [email protected]

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