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  • At It To Win

    Well I'm bord, So I'ma bout to turn a beat on a write to it...itz gonna be an intro type track for a mixtape...called "Sneak Preview"...so yea... Read E-zy...


    [hook]
    I'm at it to win
    I'm at it again
    I'm at it to win
    I'm at it again
    [x3]

    I'm at it to win, you'll choke on my pen
    I'm on top of the game and I won't ever end

    [Verse 1]
    Yo this ya boy Axis, and I be rippin' up this track
    Chokin' on my dust you'll be trippin' up in last
    And I laugh, I don't have to bring your ass to tears
    Cuz you shatter ya self like punchin' a mirror
    I'm a gift to this game, untamed, break rules
    Stirrin' up the lame how I'm known ta shake fools
    6-1-6 where you find me, got a pack of wolves behind me
    Ain't afraid to stirr up shit gettin' the grit and grimey
    Mid-West brings the best theres nothin' to test
    The rest just bitches tryin' ta 'puff out ya chest'
    Murder Mitten where I'm spittin' man easily reppin'
    Kill you wit no weapon just waitin' for ya'll to step in
    Grand Rapids ta Benton Harbor, Flint ta Detroit
    You won't leave in one piece, be splintin' ya joints
    You'll be hidin' in fear, crouchin' down in pain
    Fuck Whitey Ford Michigan be the real HOUSE OF PAIN!!!
    Download my new mixtape "Public Axis Vol. 1" http://www.sendspace.com/file/7527jn
    New Beats: www.soundclick.com/axisproductions
    Mixing/Mastering available! PM for details.

  • #2
    You've got yourself quite the works in this rap right here. That mirror line really shined greatly, as does most of the stuff said in this rap. I feel that it is a very good starter to a mixtape, reppin' where your from and all - with style.

    Your multis, vocab and wordplay just all fell into place quite nicely to form the ultimate piece of an introduction.

    Keep at it.

    Well done.
    Love, live life, proceed, progress

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    • #3
      yo axis man your really steppin up ya game man. I can imagine me chillin in my room and bumpin rhymes like this. keep up the good work.

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      • #4
        yea good shit lemme know if you ever wanna collab again
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        • #5
          Yea that shit was nice, but I only have one concern. The length of it, now are you gonna be featuring or is this an intro or are you writin another one. Other than thats its real good, I doubt length is really a problem Im sure there is a logical reason. Uh keep up the good shit tho goodluck on the mixtape.

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          • #6
            real tight nice drop man
            Southern Intellect

            Its The Southern TakeOver
            Cruz

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            • #7
              ^ Agreed
              ...Younice???..Sign uphere

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