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    this freestyle is better then my last written rap, tell me what you think peeps, cause i don't want this one to get slept on. holla

    i hate the fuckin racism i have to face everyday/it's like none of these gays heard what martin luther king had to say/whenever i'm in the grocery store i can feel the cold shoulder/or whenever i'm with my mixed girlfriend the racist bitches wonder "are they really together"/fuck yes we are bitches, get a fuckin life/how would y'all fuckin feel if i hated YOUR wife/but this happens time after time in the morning and in the night/sometimes these racist bithes start shit like fist fights/shit like that makes even the toughest ***** cry/and when you lay down at night, it's true, from racism, you can't hide/cause when you wake up in the morning, it's you its gonna find/no matter how hard you try, you can't seem to shake it/the strongest *****s in the world couldn't even cage it/racism's like a rage of fire that blazes on eternally/but i can't seem to beat it cause even right now.....it's burning me.
    Last edited by goodson; 07-25-2001, 01:15 PM.
    eviltwin

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  • #2
    Personally I don't like anythin to do with Race. Your rhyme was cool though. I'd stay away from the subject though, coz ur makin it sound like u've got it harder than any other black person on the face of the earth.

    i hate the fuckin racism i have to face everyday/
    shit like that makes even the toughest ***** cry/and when you lay down at night, it's true, from racism, you can't hide
    Laterz

    just an honest opinion
    "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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    • #3
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      thanks for the reply, but i'm speaking for everybody, not just myself. u don't have to be white or black to feel the rhymes in my rap, you just have to had felt racism before. still, thanx for the reply dawg, i appreciate it. laterz
      eviltwin

      the beginning of the end (defeated list)

      catastrophe aka controversial
      K11
      jen
      Jay Kruup
      purplehaze
      graffix
      DJ-Scidazals
      underworld (x2)
      hotacid a.k.a. kid technic
      thacrippla
      crizazy (x2)
      eggnoj
      jgravy
      DJ Adzy
      X-tacy

      loses

      eggnoj
      mc maximus prime
      AK47
      prominant
      revenant

      peeps i lost to but beat later

      eggnoj

      battle record- 20-5

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      • #4
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        c'mon peeps, rate this so i can tell what i need to improve and what i'm tight at
        Last edited by goodson; 07-25-2001, 10:44 PM.
        eviltwin

        the beginning of the end (defeated list)

        catastrophe aka controversial
        K11
        jen
        Jay Kruup
        purplehaze
        graffix
        DJ-Scidazals
        underworld (x2)
        hotacid a.k.a. kid technic
        thacrippla
        crizazy (x2)
        eggnoj
        jgravy
        DJ Adzy
        X-tacy

        loses

        eggnoj
        mc maximus prime
        AK47
        prominant
        revenant

        peeps i lost to but beat later

        eggnoj

        battle record- 20-5

        Comment

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