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  • IS THIS CRAP?......(freestyle)

    well here goes ma first freestyle

    It goes like this/yall remember it all started from yall rippin the piss/so much hatin and pent up rage inside/got ma heart burnin like a whirlin tire on ma homeboys ride/but yo i don't hate upon the usual suspect/i look down on ma life in every aspect/ma life stinks like ma armpit when i aint washed for three days and when ma rooms filled up with a purple haze/fuck it u only die once name some easier ways.

    One option has always been suicide/but fu*k i aint that weak i never been one to hide/i've always been one for the hardest option/like ma mo chose for me givin me up for adoption/ma mo's so fat looks like she needs deflatin/its that ho that turned me into someone this hatin/no wonder i aint got a girl, thats the reason i resort to masturbation/but not the physical sense in the lyrical sense/could explain why im so dense/stole and drove a big rig with no drivers licence/but when it was all down to the crucial time/fuckin police dint knock me mus av been as high as I at the time

    gimme ur opinions..i think its crap..... well the second verse is better..the first is too brief...
    Last edited by bax 2 basics; 07-30-2001, 09:59 AM.
    an option is always suicide/but fu*k i aint that weak i never been one to hide/i've always been one for the hardest option/like ma mo chose for me givin me up for adoption/ma mo's so fat looks like she needs deflatin/its that ho that turned me into someone this hatin

    S'all GRAVY Baby

    BaX 2 BaSiCs

  • #2
    I think its cool, Bax

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    • #3
      nice

      @nd verse was tite dawg! Kepp on goin!
      My shit my way, so fuck off!

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      • #4
        ya dat was pretty good man
        Keep postin
        Now let the night be dark for all of me.
        Let the night be too dark for me to see
        Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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        • #5
          freestyle 2

          everyone keeps tellin me to keep spittin ma verse/this sh*t will shoot you dead, dig a hole an bury you in a hurse/just like fred durst implies in his song 'my way'/little does the fuc**r know he's got no balls, a tail tucked between his legs with fuck all but dude this and dude that to say/with his corny worn out red NY cap/sh*t lethal and fred get any closer may aswell have his head on his lap/just like EM says yer nothin but girls/yall can sit and twirl/like the rest of this corny fuc*ed up world/including that britney spears girl.

          But as yall know this lifes a bitch you can fuck it for free/i've fuc*ed it so many times it turned its back on me/shit i may aswell resort to the usual narcotics/back to my senior year idiotics/couldn't afford spirits so i took seven bottles of antibiotics/my favourite sayin is 'anything for a high'/everytime end up laying on ma back looking up at the sky/turning up at hospital the next morning with the doctors asking the same old questions why/if i knew why would i be laying here with this many veins visible in ma eyes.......

          hey yall gimme ur opinions on this one...i think this one was better than the last....

          PEACE yall
          an option is always suicide/but fu*k i aint that weak i never been one to hide/i've always been one for the hardest option/like ma mo chose for me givin me up for adoption/ma mo's so fat looks like she needs deflatin/its that ho that turned me into someone this hatin

          S'all GRAVY Baby

          BaX 2 BaSiCs

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          • #6
            I really liked that shit, it flowed well, the rhyme structure was good, it was great. Stick with it and keep going
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            eh? shut up I'm trying to touch Bizarre's breasts...
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            • #7
              yo lemme give it a try
              its the I Z I
              J A Y
              the eazy guy
              prepare 2 cry
              cuz u know why
              im flyin by?
              to fuck yo momma's P U double S Y


              quick one....
              is this crap..??
              ...E 2 da mothafuckin Z...

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              • #8
                no beef or nuttin but eazyjay, that was the wackest rhyme i ever seen on here
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                • #9
                  lol i know
                  ...E 2 da mothafuckin Z...

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                  • #10
                    yo bax 2 basics..
                    i agree wit parahna it flowed pretty good, how long u been rhymin? u pretty good...

                    Peace
                    Now let the night be dark for all of me.
                    Let the night be too dark for me to see
                    Into the future. Let what will be, be.'

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                    • #11
                      TO PSCH

                      they are my first two proper freestyles.....thanx for the compliment man...

                      Peace dawg
                      an option is always suicide/but fu*k i aint that weak i never been one to hide/i've always been one for the hardest option/like ma mo chose for me givin me up for adoption/ma mo's so fat looks like she needs deflatin/its that ho that turned me into someone this hatin

                      S'all GRAVY Baby

                      BaX 2 BaSiCs

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                      • #12
                        It sucked!





















                        *syke* just playin lol.

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                        • #13
                          trust kk420 too say that shit, ***** back the fuck up!

                          hey if any body wants too see whack then read the slaughter house rhymes...................oh shit hangon i dont think they have done any!!!!

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by KK~420
                            *syke* just playin lol.
                            To Emin3m_2001 yous a gay ass faggot!

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                            • #15
                              you are honestly such a wimp!

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