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  • My First Freestyle

    This is my first (well one of my first) freestylez, check it ou y'all tellz us what ya think

    I hate that the way chicks cheat on me
    The way they kick me down and beat on me
    Lately how everythings been treating me
    How teachers and parents are dicreeting me
    It all amounts to Massive piles of stress
    But no one gives a shit, No one cares less
    Ah Fuk, my whole lifes a mess
    But what do I do, when Im down as I think down can get
    I pick my shit up, try again, cause I know I aint beat yet
    I been through tough stuff, been through it all
    I hit the bottom, at the lowest point so how can I fall
    I'll dance around like a mad fool, just like a freak
    I hit, now Im gonna climb back up, and Im gonna peak
    All that shits gone and behind me
    I've lost my mind, It better hurry and find me
    All along I thought it was right here beside me
    Got no sanity, no Patience, so dont try me
    I see my mind, look there its flying
    Why dont you believe me, im not lying
    Im trying my hardest, god knows Im trying
    Lookin closely, I see my mind crying
    I flash it, catch it, and look inside
    What do I find, one hell of a ride
    I tried hard, I really have tried
    Whats goin on am I losin my mind?
    No Vain, No Pain, No Mercy, No Vanity
    Im startin to think Im losin my sanity
    theres no way I could be goin insane
    Shit whats wrong with my brain

    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Can he be goin insane
    Smashed by a car, hit by a train
    And inside Common Sense is slain
    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Can he be goin insane
    Smashed by a car, hit by a train
    And inside Common Sense is slain
    Whats wrong with Eggs brain

    Ya think ur tough, you're fake as plastic
    Although its pretty funny, I'd even say fuckin classic
    What goes around comes around like an elastic
    And the way Halletts is headed is fuckin drastic
    Used to be the occasional shoving and bootings
    Now we're gettin hit with weapons and drive-by shootings
    All the trouble givin Old folks a scare
    And little cunts that're caught unaware
    Liftin they heads up by grabbin their hair
    Big cunts treatin little cunts unfair
    When will all the madness come to a halt
    Its all messed up, and not a single persons fault
    Little kid thinkin they're part of a cult
    They need to grow up and learn to act like adult
    Lets all grow up like maybe a couple feet
    Then walk around places like the soldiers elite
    If anyone fucks up, give 'em a little treat
    Dont hit him too hard, dont wanna make em weep
    Just leave them there, the cops'll come and sweep
    and take em cuffed in their paddy wagon jeep
    They'll be scarred for life and wont get any sleep
    Whens alls said and done law low, without a peep
    Cause this is one secret ya'd wanna keep
    The story of how ya grew an extra couple feet

    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Can he be goin insane
    Smashed by a car, hit by a train
    And inside Common Sense is slain
    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Can he be goin insane
    Smashed by a car, hit by a train
    And inside Common Sense is slain
    Whats wrong with Eggs brain

    Outta Control, mad and insane
    Guns bein fired off like disses McBain
    What Ever happened to that old skool
    Is outta style? Aint it cool?
    Whats wrong with mindin bout ur own life
    Without worryin bout gettin threatened with a knife
    A gun, a bat, a pole, a mallett
    Weapons dont belong out on the streets of hallett
    Should work out like a two way deal
    We'll have chicks walkin round rasing sex appeal
    That aint gonna happen, 'its a dream thats unreal
    Cops still goin round, always hear them sirens squeel
    Stayin outta crazy shit, just like I should
    Not challengin anything, whether it be knuckle or wood
    I aint tryin to be down in tha motha fuckin hood
    So I stay Chiled and its all good

    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Can he be goin insane
    Smashed by a car, hit by a train
    And inside Common Sense is slain
    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Can he be goin insane
    Smashed by a car, hit by a train
    And inside Common Sense is slain
    Whats wrong with Eggs brain

    Is there some crazy shit fucked in my head?
    These brain cells, are goin one by one, droppin dead
    Its weighin me down like a ton of lead
    I aint even seein straight, Im seein blue as red
    I gotta work out whats wrong
    So I can set it straight
    Y'all say Hit this Bong
    Its fuckin great
    Somehow I dont think thats gonna help out
    You're tellin me to hit the chronic shit, you'll shout
    Thanx 4 tha offer but this case can do without
    It would only make it worse, without a doubt
    Things are gettin better they're startin to annoint
    Instead of a bong you're rollin a joint
    Now your eyes, are startin to see the point
    You're sellin off the chronic and rakin in tha coinz
    You got it sused, you Cussed, You just
    Get out on the street and sell this shit u must
    Walk down this path of footsteps in a row
    Lets all follow thy Egg, come on lets go

    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Can he be goin insane
    Smashed by a car, hit by a train
    And inside Common Sense is slain
    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Whats wrong with eggs brain
    Can he be goin insane
    Smashed by a car, hit by a train
    And inside Common Sense is slain
    Whats wrong with Eggs brain


    A bit Of Feedback Y'all Would be good Thanx!!!!
    -Thy Egg
    **Tha New Era**

  • #2
    That wudn a free, it wuz more of a song, free's dont have chorus's (unless u got photographic memory and can remember one) It was ight i guess
    Go CANADA

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    • #3
      that was ok i guess.
      I'm a stingray. I don't sing, I sting.
      I'll blind you, AND slit yo throat wit da same ring...

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      • #4
        Yeh actually it is a song, but I done it all with bits of freestyle put together and kinda chucked in a chorus.

        To me Rappin's an art
        So Im rippin it from deep within the heart
        Puttin all in, rythym and soul
        Sendin out lyrics like Old King cole
        U asked for a freestyle, I gave a song
        What the Fuck man!! thats just wrong
        Final Fanaly, Finally Smash that Gong
        Sit down chill out, hit that bong
        Im lyrically huge, as if I were King Kong
        God Damn Im havin trouble gettin in2 this thong
        I Could sit here spittin all day long
        But Id be shittin, and sittin playin ping pong

        Thats a little freestyle I just made, took me a couple minutes, its abit quick and dodgy but tell us what ya think of that then
        **Tha New Era**

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