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    //\\//\\//\\//\\//\\ Alienat0r - Just Wrong! - //\\//\\//\\//\\//\\//\


    The ][_alienat0r_][ 2K1
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    /// mr.nobody! rap so deep I,ll have y,all crying in ya sleep

    /// ya,ll wanna talk about rap, well no talking allowed just me
    rappin to the crowd... knocking these *cough* rappers OUT!

    // so ya,ll still wanna talk thought not!!!, cause ya,ll aint !!hot!!
    your wrong, "cant we just get along" ........ Hmmm no!.

    // You think your the only one born into a shit life

    // Well I got news for you I was growing with no .. shoes on my feet, no where to sleep, no where to eat.

    // now Iam a grown man Ive made my way in the world, lived my life to the full, not from rap but from slanging rock

    // so best you duck when you see me reach for my hip.. cause ya,ll about to take a clip of !Xplosive lyrics!

    // Ive got regrets but thats how life rolls, aint nothin you can do to stop it just lay down and let it take you under, underground to the next level rap star spectacular the alienat0r !! , closing your door aint gonna help! cause I,ll be back one day to take whats owed to me.

    // Cause your dead wrong!
    // So Fuck you, sisqo and his thong...

    // So watch out unless you wanna see the dark side of me, the black side of me, the type of ***** that would shoot you in the knee cap's for lookin at me, so backup up

    MR. ---->SING:!: SONG:!:<----.


    Cause thats just 100% FUCKIN! wrong.

    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Just a f**k around, PUBLIC DISS!

    Peace ^Alien^
    Dictionary:!?!?

    Define Plastic..

    A hard/soft material.
    A form of britney spears, and many other pop *cough* stars.

  • #2
    Not Bad

    U need to tighten up yr lines and use more metaphor and more vocab to im prove ur rap
    good luck
    Only a few of us left

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    • #3
      I can't believe u rhymed Wrong with Sisqo's Thong... haha, u've been listening to Devils Night WAYYYYYY TOOO MUCH!!
      // Cause your dead wrong!
      // So Fuck you, sisqo and his thong...
      U need to sort ya rhyming system out too. Too many '//' Don't leave such big spaces either. Other than that, just add some metaphors, and u'll be well on ya way

      Laterz
      "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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      • #4
        god damn!!

        ignore this post, I was kinda pissed when I done it hehe.

        peace ^alien^

        ps: I will drop some of my shit soon!
        Dictionary:!?!?

        Define Plastic..

        A hard/soft material.
        A form of britney spears, and many other pop *cough* stars.

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