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    i eat anything that walks
    i swallow em whole
    then spit ot in a bowl
    im like hannibal the cannibal
    but ten times worse
    than a nurse given a rubella enokulation....

    i eat chicks in the morning
    guys fa lunch
    and oh no guess what i eat they parnets in tha mornin





    peace out
    i know it waz pretty shit but it was my 1st freestyle ....so back off muthafucka






  • #2
    hi there. your almost just as bad at freestyling as me ( i think im worse)
    I have posted some rhymes at this board and got told it sucked at it. But I havent stoped writing!
    Maybe im not the best man to give advise, but you got to make your rhymes longer and more compligated.

    Dont give up. keep writning. We are going to show them haters

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    • #3
      Everyone has a first freestyle right? Just look at what some of the better MCs write, so u can get ideas about bar schemes and content. U should look at these guys... even PM em for advice..
      • Xplicit
      • mc maximus prime
      • Two Thirds
      • Yeroc
      • GRUESOME
      • emhyr
      • Prominent
      • $o $olid Player
      • CoNtRoVeRsIaL
      • me


      Goldie, you'd rhyme better if u took your focus away from CoNtRo's ass.

      Laterz

      Last edited by Ian; 07-29-2001, 03:09 PM.
      "Get Busy Livin' or Get Busy Dyin'.. Thats God Damn Right"

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      • #4
        That was alright for a first freestyle, but it was WAAAAY too short... make it at least 20 bars long, so that when people read it they don't get mad that there was nothing to read.

        Heh, keep it up, and work on flow and metaphors.
        When you get more posts, don't be afraid to ask for a battle.

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