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  • @#%*ed up !$&^

    Vic ransacks your house/
    kidnap your spouse/
    pimp slap a mouse/
    i want every piece of cheese/
    i'm kraftmatic,grindin *****s faces against their ass/
    went in broke,came out their crib rich,fail in life?shit,i guess i passed/
    check the average grade of a savage raid/
    most go in testin without a vest and bat or gauge/
    attacked in chain saw massarcers/
    your brains gone and splattered/
    same for your bladder/
    never leave a contender pissed off/
    treat'em like toliets to shit on/
    my dick to chicks like an A&R's ass to kiss on/
    imagine rappers quiet with nine fifths drawn/
    bagde the honor to kill his great pride/
    like a Celtic fan at the finals in eight 5/
    in chypers,i spit fire since i ate knives/
    thought i cheated on your girl since we met twice/
    checked enough to floss but talk death like i'm livin a pre-meds life/
    a couple of boys double jointed,i know since i was the pirest that wed the dikes/
    ripped a NYC students limb off to beat you with a lead pipe.

  • #2
    WAAAAA????

    I um.. I liked the flow andthe words were all there. But:

    what the hell does this mean???

    "in chypers,i spit fire since i ate knives"

    Being dreadfully honest with you, i'd say.. that shit doesn't make a sprinkle of sense.

    "ripped a NYC students limb off to beat you with a lead pipe."

    No sense. But, it's okay. Just use more metaphors and idioms, which people tend to overlook. You said some here, but they weren't so interesting. People like metaphors and lines that make them wish that they said it first.

    Keep working, your flow isn't bad at all.

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    • #3
      re:metephors

      the lead pipe thing was from the kids breathin in all this asbestos at schools in New York but you may not have heard about it since it wasn't big news outside the tri-state.the knife thing...you right.i meant ate flamed knives.

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