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  • Revenant
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    That shit didnt make sense, and the content was ... how can i say it ... wack. Post another rhyme that makes sense and we'll give you a critique of your verse.

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  • North Ace
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    thats not really a rap dude it sounds like some chant or somethin but theres no flow to it and it doesnt make too much sense

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  • MrsShady
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    kool

    thats kool it needs more work to it! it kinda looks like a poem the a freestyle! work on th eapperence an u'll b fine



    keep ryming

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  • cocaine
    started a topic just some mad shit i wanna spit

    just some mad shit i wanna spit

    i,m a murderous beast
    that likes to feast on bitches in the east
    i eat bitches from top to bottom
    when our crew comes no one can stop em
    sometimes i dig people up and eat them rotten
    its like chewing cotton
    i love the taste of a hoe raw
    it makes me want to go eat more
    people know me as a mass murderah
    if ya flesh taste good i've heard of ya
    or may be tried a piece and robbed ya fleece
    every time i have a rave i crave
    for the skin of my mommas slave
    i just light up some purple haze
    cause i've waited for dayz
    to take this bitches flesh, she looks so fresh
    i'm like the texas chainsaw massacre
    your girls on the run and i got a chainsaw running after her
    while the bitch is screaming i full of laughter
    i eat em down to the bone
    and what i dont finish i take home
    some people call me mad in the head
    but they just jealous because i eat the dead

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