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  • truth17
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    ok i will work on it just learning

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  • .Profound.
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    Lines are too short
    no multis
    not so good flow
    no wordplay
    don't see any punchlines

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  • truth17
    started a topic make it freestyle

    make it freestyle

    when i was younger i was told i wouldnt exceed
    hopless i shouldnt even have a dream
    but now im older im coming full force
    do i want this rap thing of course
    i gotta show the haters
    what its like to make the paper
    now they saying truth you shinning
    i know i gotta wear sun glasses cause im blinding


    this is only my second freestyle
    leave constructive feed if its bad just tell me what i need to work on

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