Muda you verse 1 + hook (HUGE PROPS FOR FEEDBACK)

[metahman]

Im a serial killer inside your serial box
Ready to eat you alive with no material props
Im a cannibal, that means I eat humans//
I kill you so many times, that the shit becomes a nusanse//
Recently I acquired a new sense//
I can feel the location where you stands//
I usually say that I gotta be cool/
But it was the quiet kid that got a tool and shot up his school//
Homie I do the shit you never dared to do//
And columbine dont compare, to what I’m prepared to do//
If you know me I keep a handy stack//
Have someone shoot you in the hand, leave you handicapped//
And no fuckin way im getting on pukd//
I that that faggot Ashton in the trunk//
And leave him smelling like a skunk//
And fuck what he say//
I get it poppin anyday//
Cut you up and sell your body part on ebay//
I become and organ dona//
And if you fuck with my persona//
I put you in heaven, get you higher than a stona//
I cut you and your bitch with the same razor blade//
Then you can have unsafe sex cause you both’ll have aids//
And I can talk about killing you in a million ways//
But I rather hold a gun to you and make you do as I say

[L.A.]

I kill you so many times, that the shit becomes a nusanse//
Recently I acquired a new sense//

best line^^^^

ehhhh...6/10....no beef......keep elevatin

[metahman]

props man

[Tribute]

started off real nice got weaker tho at the end
still a nice rhyme

[metahman]

the last two bars, i forced outa me. thx

[L.A.]

no beef,,,but heres a word of advice homie.......use meta's if ya names metahman

[metahman]

^ you talking about metahpors?

[metahman]

anymo feedback

[L.A.]

^ you talking about metahpors?

yezzir

[Negol]

Started up great, ended up pretty sucky i think. Good rhymes all the way holmes.

[EZP]

I usually say that I gotta be cool/
But it was the quiet kid that got a tool and shot up his school//
Homie I do the shit you never dared to do//
And columbine dont compare, to what I’m prepared to do//
If you know me I keep a handy stack//
Have someone shoot you in the hand, leave you handicapped//

those are the best few bars there, the rest wasnt that great.. seems forced, just try to come up with some original lines and if you're tired of writing then stop rather than write shitty lines

[metahman]

props

[Seaptown]

ya'll is wack. seaptown runs da game. go to my thread and try to take on me and main daime bitches.

[metahman]

man shut up

[Underground]

It's wack as fuck, i'm sick and tired of white boys rapping about murder

lyrics=acceptable
everything else especially content=wack wack wack