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  • "Patience"- Ridiculous Rick (Verse 2 and a sub hook)

    I know I've been a bit of a board hog lately but I was just really trying to finish this shit, before it slipped my mind. I wasn't even drunk when I wrote this second verse which is a suprise so we'll see if it's any good you let me know.

    "Patience"- Ridiculous Rick

    Verse #1:
    Some people wanna talk foul, that's cool I've got pals,
    And all of em' make me smile, check my profile,
    I've got a disc catalog, filled with ill dialaloge,
    I know who I am, I ain't at risk of idenity fraud,
    Cause you never gave me credit, you wanna edit,
    Knuckleheaded, don't wanna see me makin' debits,
    Stuck in overdraft you wanna block my path,
    You don't know the half, cause you don't know math,
    My souls whole & I've hold bold in the cold,
    Controlled the scold of all the hate I was told,
    Let it fall right off my back, envy what you lack,
    I've cut the slack, & kept it tight on these tracks,
    Mostly in spite, but mostly I've been taught to fight,
    For what I believe in and I know this is right,
    With talent this blaitent, I figured there'd be statments,
    It's an up hill battle and I've got plenty of patience.

    Hook:
    Most haters are dense, so I don't take offense,
    And I ain't phased so I don't jump on defense,
    Foul talkin inspirees that I should even resent,
    Some peope are slow and I've got plenty of patience.

    Verse #2:
    If it makes you feel any better I hate myself,
    I wouldn't even buy my own records off the shelf,
    Cause half of what I say seems force, my voice is horse,
    I'd probably stop before I started but I'm reinforced,
    By fakes with bad mindstates, my mistakes & rap tapes,
    So I've got room to create, no exit signs no escape,
    With my back at the wall and the bass shakin',
    I guess it's mine for the takin', bring home the bacon,
    Butterin' up my toast, meet your host, who's oath,
    Is to make the upmost, of his unwilling idle hand,
    Who your listening to now daily become a man,
    With over active sweat glands, pen slippery clamed,
    With the expectation of a universal standing,
    Branding something outstanding it so demanding,
    Because these statements, often require matience,
    It's an uphill battle I hope we've got the patience.

    Hook:
    Not done but wil be done shortly (Sub-Hook)
    Last edited by New Guy; 02-07-2007, 02:17 AM.
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  • #2
    The computer was sick, so we took it to the hospital now it's all better uppin'.
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    • #3
      Uppin'.
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      • #4
        ^
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        • #5
          Sex in the city is the wackest televison show I've ever seen. But you gotta love sluts.
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          • #6
            hook was fine till the last line
            Originally posted by InsaneLyrically
            Imagine me holding
            your legs up open,
            Imagine me kissing the pain away
            as your cherry is broken,

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            • #7
              Good lookin' out that can be fixed easily.
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              • #8
                decent - didnt really see no stuff that would make a persons jaw drop,,alot of simple rhyme's....this was mediocre....5/10

                no beef homie......jus my opinion....keep on droppin man,,you'll get better

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                • #9
                  Still droppin that hot shit Liked it, long time no speak dude whats good? You into audio yet?

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                  • #10
                    Nah I'm to busy to do audio I'm workin' two jobs so I've got like enough time to like eat, sleep, take a shower, take a shit, and then squeeze a song in every now and then.

                    What have you been up to?
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                    • #11
                      Thanks for the props by the way.
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                      • #12
                        I dunno, I've kind of stopped writing now for one reason or another, I'm not really sure, I just kind of stopped. So I haven't written/recorded in a long ass time. Soon I'm starting a Music Technology course at college though so I can learn how to produce and make beats better, so hopefully that will get me back into recording.

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                        • #13
                          Droppin' that shit that hits the radar but doesn't get the light's flashin'.
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