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    lemme tell ya, this nerdy dude I knew from high school
    I guess he smoked sess so he was kinda cool
    Last summer he called me up, he said "you wanna find hos?"
    I was like, I suppose
    see my friends had girlfriends so they were into different fun
    so me and my high school chum were wingmen like top gun
    anyways this time it was about two thirty
    one night when my friend earned the name dirty
    first he confessed to bein burned, he said:
    "It burns when I piss," I was like brother you don't need to tell me this
    But I'm glad he did, the next thing he asked
    "Yo, you wanna fuck a girl in the ass?
    Man I know a freak about forty years old
    she isn't too good lookin but her pussy ain't cold
    anal sex, she's into it, you wanna do it to it?"
    I said man- are you suggesting that I share
    an easy uninteresting chick with your dirty fucking dick?
    Why would it be a good idea to invade at the risk of gonorrhea,
    you better shut the fuck up because your mouth's got diarrhea
    and furthermore from this day on
    your name is dirty and only dirty you no longer are John.
    Last edited by moxie; 02-12-2007, 09:24 PM.

  • #2
    wasnt feelin it
    flow was off to me but i tend to read em wierd because my flow is weird
    ".........tryna battle me, please i cause terror
    then i carry motherfuckas to graves like pallbearers"
    -Quazaar

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    • #3
      no, the flow is pretty dirty
      I was feeling that all my shit was way too clean, i wanted to make something that you had to force into a beat

      my first attempt at a storyrap, I don't think there are any standout lines or anything but i just kinda improvised it, no doubt some refining would help
      Last edited by moxie; 02-12-2007, 09:32 PM.

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      • #4
        yea keep rewriting it
        add some more word play

        but to be honest with u i wouldnt listin to anything i say because i dont write much all i do is freestyle

        keep at it
        ".........tryna battle me, please i cause terror
        then i carry motherfuckas to graves like pallbearers"
        -Quazaar

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        • #5
          Here's a better rap to prove I ain't lost it:

          So- you wanna be my foe?
          Man I got my own terror alert level color code
          I launch lyrics like RPGs
          attract authorities like APBs
          My fine tuned improvised rhyme EDs
          booby trap the mic for enemy MCs
          Cold blooded- to freeze the seven seas
          Revvin motors with volume ten thousand CCs
          Verse accelerates to impossible speeds
          Zero to sixty, take the lead I bleed trees
          A flammable bannable substance
          in a drug trance
          perstiance of existance in an altered state
          I know I ain't supposed to flake but it's grrr-eat
          Like fried in hash oil made from canibus nugs
          this is my brain on drugs

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          • #6
            but anyone can write a rhyme

            go to one of the cyphers 4 lines or 2 lines and diss the dude above
            see how the 'off of the dome' vacob holds up
            ".........tryna battle me, please i cause terror
            then i carry motherfuckas to graves like pallbearers"
            -Quazaar

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            • #7
              i might hit 100 if i keep comin with these cyphers
              lol
              ".........tryna battle me, please i cause terror
              then i carry motherfuckas to graves like pallbearers"
              -Quazaar

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