"Dirty"

[moxie]

lemme tell ya, this nerdy dude I knew from high school
I guess he smoked sess so he was kinda cool
Last summer he called me up, he said "you wanna find hos?"
I was like, I suppose
see my friends had girlfriends so they were into different fun
so me and my high school chum were wingmen like top gun
anyways this time it was about two thirty
one night when my friend earned the name dirty
first he confessed to bein burned, he said:
"It burns when I piss," I was like brother you don't need to tell me this
But I'm glad he did, the next thing he asked
"Yo, you wanna fuck a girl in the ass?
Man I know a freak about forty years old
she isn't too good lookin but her pussy ain't cold
anal sex, she's into it, you wanna do it to it?"
I said man- are you suggesting that I share
an easy uninteresting chick with your dirty fucking dick?
Why would it be a good idea to invade at the risk of gonorrhea,
you better shut the fuck up because your mouth's got diarrhea
and furthermore from this day on
your name is dirty and only dirty you no longer are John.

[Tribute]

wasnt feelin it
flow was off to me but i tend to read em wierd because my flow is weird

[moxie]

no, the flow is pretty dirty
I was feeling that all my shit was way too clean, i wanted to make something that you had to force into a beat

my first attempt at a storyrap, I don't think there are any standout lines or anything but i just kinda improvised it, no doubt some refining would help

[Tribute]

yea keep rewriting it
add some more word play

but to be honest with u i wouldnt listin to anything i say because i dont write much all i do is freestyle

keep at it

[moxie]

Here's a better rap to prove I ain't lost it:

So- you wanna be my foe?
Man I got my own terror alert level color code
I launch lyrics like RPGs
attract authorities like APBs
My fine tuned improvised rhyme EDs
booby trap the mic for enemy MCs
Cold blooded- to freeze the seven seas
Revvin motors with volume ten thousand CCs
Verse accelerates to impossible speeds
Zero to sixty, take the lead I bleed trees
A flammable bannable substance
in a drug trance
perstiance of existance in an altered state
I know I ain't supposed to flake but it's grrr-eat
Like fried in hash oil made from canibus nugs
this is my brain on drugs

[Tribute]

but anyone can write a rhyme

go to one of the cyphers 4 lines or 2 lines and diss the dude above
see how the 'off of the dome' vacob holds up

[Tribute]

i might hit 100 if i keep comin with these cyphers
lol