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    Sup? I'm new at the board. I am an 18 year old caucasion rapper who lives in Colorado Springs, Co. This is a song that I wrote about the type of shit that pisses me off or gets me depressed. I wrote the intro when I was 14. The rest was written about a year ago. It is copywrited so don't try to steal anything. I have gotten lyrics stolen in the past so I have learned my lesson. Please give your honest opinion and thanks for viewing my lyrics. Bye

    Title - The Down Side
    Writer - iLLicit


    [ Intro ]
    yo, I fall in these depressions
    with self asteem prevention
    that often lead in seconds
    to offly weak impressions
    and longer sleep extensions
    under sheets and blankets
    all my dreams degressing
    I try to seek acceptance
    along with peoples freindships
    not acheived aggendas
    but this weed is helpin
    when i concieve obsessive
    anguished greif and stressin
    that causes keen compressions
    while I scream intensive
    with increased agression
    thoughts of deep incisions
    both wrists leak and hemorage
    with the free intentions
    to hop or leap a terrance
    my souls released to heaven
    angels seize the entrance
    while I keep on beggin
    jesus please except it


    [ Verse 1 ]
    yo, commonly, I'm never calm, I'm seethe
    when I constantly, have to mop and sweep in exhausting heat
    till this floor is spotless clean
    wiping down these squalid seats
    with a swab or wetted cotten sheet
    when this sanitised water seeps
    through my hands to cause my finger tips and palms to crease
    while I'm scrubing pots and pans
    when everytime this offel grease has to pop and splash
    and scald my arms and hands
    when I stomp these boxes flat
    to grasp and haul, along with trash to garbage cans
    so these preps can taunt and luagh
    when I'm stressed, I'm swarn to rid of sets and swarms
    to able me to stretch and yawn with sweaty pores
    when my tempers lost inside this resturant
    from when these customers
    who turn and walk away and mumble words, then I cuss and curse
    cuz they tend to get on every last fucking nerve
    then I'm home from work in evening time
    then I go to sleep at night with dreams of fright
    from hearing both my parents scream and fight
    trying to seak and find a place where I could leave or hide
    when my mother weeps and crys untill she's teary eyed
    from all the schemes and lies
    thought of by my fathers feeble mind from over drinking beer and whine
    or when I'm contemplating suicide to leave this ruined life
    from feeling blue inside with droopy eyes
    that are soon to cry all through the night
    iLLicit
    J.D - JuVeNiLe DaLiNkWeNtZ

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